Hamdami

[sabah]

Introducing Hamdami again I still can’t find his poetry on the net, I’ve been posting his stuff since '99. He’s really worth the time

Khawaab tootein ge to her manzar nayaN ho jae ga
phir haqaaeq se hamara saamana ho jae ga

rahbaro kuch to dikhao manzilooN ki raoshani
wara andherooN meiN gum yeh qaafila ho jae ga

ae taib-e-gam mujhe is haal per hi choR de
dard jab had se baRhe ga khud dawa ho jae ga

terta phirta hai ab jo dard ke sailaab meiN
cheeNhti lehrooN meiN aakhir la-pata ho jae ga

waadi-e-ulfat meiN tu rakh to sahi apna qadam
jalne bhujne ka tujhe bhi tajurba ho jae ga

zehen meiN jab bhi tumhara naam aae ga kabhi
lafz jo hontoN pe aae ga dua ho jae ga

chaar din ki baat hai seh le thapeRe jaan per
phir her ik toofaan se tu aashana ho jae ga

talhiyooN ko jazb kerna seekh le mere nadeem
dheere dheere gham t’re dil ki gaza ho jae ga

ho gai chashm-e-karam to dekhna anwaar phir
yeh badan dast-e-khizaaN meiN bhi hara ho jae ga

[sabah]

One more :o

Apne sehme hue jazbaat liye meiN kab tak
khud ko khalaat ki zanjeer meiN jakRa dekhoN
mere hontooN pe machal jaati hai baarish ki dua
jab koi gird meiN lipta hua chehra dekhooN

[Hamdami]

[Pyara_sa_doost]

Re: Hamdami

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by sabah: *
Introducing Hamdami again :) I still can't find his poetry on the net, I've been posting his stuff since '99. He's really worth the time :)

Khawaab tootein ge to her manzar nayaN ho jae ga
phir haqaaeq se hamara saamana ho jae ga

rahbaro kuch to dikhao manzilooN ki raoshani
wara andherooN meiN gum yeh qaafila ho jae ga

ae taib-e-gam mujhe is haal per hi choR de
dard jab had se baRhe ga khud dawa ho jae ga

terta phirta hai ab jo dard ke sailaab meiN
cheeNhti lehrooN meiN aakhir la-pata ho jae ga

waadi-e-ulfat meiN tu rakh to sahi apna qadam
jalne bhujne ka tujhe bhi tajurba ho jae ga

zehen meiN jab bhi tumhara naam aae ga kabhi
lafz jo hontoN pe aae ga dua ho jae ga

chaar din ki baat hai seh le thapeRe jaan per
phir her ik toofaan se tu aashana ho jae ga

talhiyooN ko jazb kerna seekh le mere nadeem
dheere dheere gham t're dil ki gaza ho jae ga

ho gai chashm-e-karam to dekhna anwaar phir
yeh badan dast-e-khizaaN meiN bhi hara ho jae ga
[/QUOTE]

wow puri nazm hi gr8 he super :) thanx to shair wid us :)

ta ta

[Pyara_sa_doost]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by sabah: *
One more :o

Apne sehme hue jazbaat liye meiN kab tak
khud ko khalaat ki zanjeer meiN jakRa dekhoN
mere hontooN pe machal jaati hai baarish ki dua
jab koi gird meiN lipta hua chehra dekhooN

[Hamdami]
[/QUOTE]

hmm wow yeh mireh bi bohat ache hein really good :)

keep posting :)

tata:)

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Boht khoob..

thansk for sharin sabah..

[Minerva]

zehen meiN jab bhi tumhara naam aae ga kabhi
lafz jo hontoN pe aae ga dua ho jae ga

sighs

acha likha hai. Thanks for posting Sabah.

[Pramod]

Re: Hamdami

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by sabah: *
Introducing Hamdami again :) I still can't find his poetry on the net, I've been posting his stuff since '99. He's really worth the time :)

Khawaab tootein ge to her manzar nayaN ho jae ga
phir haqaaeq se hamara saamana ho jae ga

rahbaro kuch to dikhao manzilooN ki raoshani
wara andherooN meiN gum yeh qaafila ho jae ga

ae taib-e-gam mujhe is haal per hi choR de
dard jab had se baRhe ga khud dawa ho jae ga

terta phirta hai ab jo dard ke sailaab meiN
cheeNhti lehrooN meiN aakhir la-pata ho jae ga

waadi-e-ulfat meiN tu rakh to sahi apna qadam
jalne bhujne ka tujhe bhi tajurba ho jae ga

zehen meiN jab bhi tumhara naam aae ga kabhi
lafz jo hontoN pe aae ga dua ho jae ga

chaar din ki baat hai seh le thapeRe jaan per
phir her ik toofaan se tu aashana ho jae ga

talhiyooN ko jazb kerna seekh le mere nadeem
dheere dheere gham t're dil ki gaza ho jae ga

ho gai chashm-e-karam to dekhna anwaar phir
yeh badan dast-e-khizaaN meiN bhi hara ho jae ga
[/QUOTE]

bahot hii achhi ghazal hai ** Saba **. ye misra to bahot hii achha laga

Khawaab tootein ge to her manzar nayaN ho jae ga

bahot saare sher achhe lage.
ese padhe waqt Bashir Badar kii ye ghazal yaad aa gayee jist Jagjit Singh ne gaaya bhii bahot hii achha hai

sar jhukaaoge to patthar devataa ho jaayegaa
itanaa mat chaaho use wo be-wafaa ho jaayegaa

ham bhii dariyaa hai.n hame.n apanaa hunar maaluum hai
jis taraf bhii chal pa.De.nge raastaa ho jaayegaa

kitanii sachchaa_ii se mujhase zindagii ne kah diyaa
tuu nahii.n meraa to ko_ii duusaraa ho jaayegaa

main Khudaa kaa naam le kar pii rahaa huu.N dosto.n
zahar bhii is me agar hogaa davaa ho jaayegaa

ruuTh jaanaa to mohabbat kii alaamat hai magar
kyaa Khabar thii mujh se wo itanaa Khafaa ho jaayegaa

Thanks for sharing.........

[Pramod]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by sabah: *
One more :o

Apne sehme hue jazbaat liye meiN kab tak
khud ko khalaat ki zanjeer meiN jakRa dekhoN
mere hontooN pe machal jaati hai baarish ki dua
jab koi gird meiN lipta hua chehra dekhooN

[Hamdami]
[/QUOTE]

ye bhii bahot achha sher hai..
ese paDhe waqt Parveen Shakir kii ye ghazal yaad aa gayee..bahot hii achhi hai..read it once

apanii rusavaa_ii tere naam ka charchaa dekhuu.N
ek zaraa sher kahuu.N aur mai.n kyaa kyaa dekhuu.N

niind aa jaaye to kyaa mahafile.n barpaa dekhuu.N
aa.Nkh khul jaaye to tanhaa_ii kaa sahara dekhuu.N

shaam bhii ho ga_ii dhundhalaa ga_ii aa.Nkhe.n bhii merii
bhuulanevaale mai.n kab tak teraa rastaa dekhuu.N

sab zide.n us kii mai.n puurii karuu.N har baat sunuu.N
ek bachche kii tarah se use ha.Nstaa dekhuu.N

mujh pe chhaa jaaye vo barasaat kii Khushbuu kii tarah
ang ang apanaa usii rut me.n mahakataa dekhuu.N

tuu merii tarah se yaktaa hai magar mere habib
jii me.n aataa hai ko_ii aur bhii tujh saa dekhuu.N

mai.n ne jis lamhe ko puujaa hai use bas ek baar
Khvaab ban kar terii aa.Nkho.n me.n utarataa dekhuu.N

tuu meraa kuchh nahii.n lagataa hai magar jaan-e-hayaat
jaane kyo.n tere liye dil ko dha.Dakataa dekhuu.N

[sabah]

PSD, thanks a lot :)

HH, shukria :)

Minerva, you should get his book. He doesn't write much, but jo bhi abhi tak maiN ne paRha hai is really good. Except all those MUQ ashaar and stuff :o

Pramod, thanks :) Last time I posted the first poem, a friend had posted exact same ghazal by Bashir Badar in response. I love the first two ashaar, waise to poori ghazal hi zabardast hai :) BB is a good poet.

[Saqi_the_angel]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by sabah: *
One more :o

Apne sehme hue jazbaat liye meiN kab tak
khud ko khalaat ki zanjeer meiN jakRa dekhoN
mere hontooN pe machal jaati hai baarish ki dua
jab koi gird meiN lipta hua chehra dekhooN

[Hamdami]
[/QUOTE]

Sabah,

it's very nice.

thanks for sharing