Hamdam

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Nadir-e-RozGar hote thay
hum bi hamdam shumaaR hote thay

Saaf-e-dushman mein haiN jo KhaRey
wo tu apne bi yaar hote thay

waqt kaysa badal gaya Unko
jo HusaaN ka mayaaR hote thay

ab tu bhu’le se yaad athe haiN
jo Dil-e-daagh BayshumaR hote thay

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Re: Hamdam

Achi hay... aakhri shair kuch samagh main ni aaya..

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Re: Hamdam

Maqta mujhey bhi samajh nahi aaya :confused:

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Re: Hamdam

Jo Daagh e dil beshumar hotey they.

now it make sense? -unsure-

~nice efforts

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Re: Hamdam

**bahot Khoob koshish hai. aapke andar shaa'irii ke jaraaseem paaye jaate haiN lihaaza bahr [meter] par zaraa tavajjo deN...to aapko bahooot maza aayegaa shaa'iri karte huye.

maqt'a to mujhe kahiiN bhii nazar nahiiN aayaa? taKhallus kia farmaate haiN aap NaabiGh saaHib?**

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Re: Hamdam

the last shair does sound better when u read it like this...

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Re: Hamdam

yup it was a typo, in actual it goes like ' jo daagh-e-dil - bayshumaR hote thay ' inspired by the misra ' daagh-e-dil hum ko yaad ane lagey '

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Re: Hamdam

Aliyish

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Re: Hamdam

Aliyish uncle is it u? haaawww