Hamay bohat hai ye "Sadat-e-ishQ" ki nisbat

chand_chehra · March 10, 2003, 10:40pm

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Chiragh mangtay rahnaY ka kucH sabaB bhi nahi
Andhera kasay bataye kay aB shub bhi nahi

Main apnay zaa’m maiN ek ba’zyaaft par khusH ho–n
Ye waqiea hai kay mujH ko milA woh ab bhi nahi

Jo meray shairooN main mujH say ziyadA bolta hai
Main is ki bazM main ek harf-e- zer-e-luB bhi nahi

Aur ab tU zinDagi karnay kay soo tarekay haiN
Hum is kay hijR main tahA rahay thay juB bhi nahi

KamaaL shaks tha jis nay mujhay tabhA kiya
Kilaaf is kay hosakA ye dil ab bhi nahi

Ye dastakaiN, ye meri zindagi ki adhi raat
Hawa ka shoor samjH lo tu kuch ajaB bhi nahi

Ye dukH nahi kay andherooN say sula’H ki huM nay
Malal ye hai kay ab subhA ki talaB bhi nahi

Hisaabay darbadri tujh say maanG sakta hai
Gareeb shehr magar itnA beadaB bhi nahi

Hamay bohat hai ye “Sadat-e-ishQ” ki nisbat
Kay ye Qabeela asa kuM nasab bhi nahi

NikamiJano · March 10, 2003, 10:45pm

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Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

Jo meray shairooN main mujH say ziyadA bolta hai
Main is ki bazM main ek harf-e- zer-e-luB bhi nahi

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chando g sari gazal he ma fav..;)..but this sher is awsome...:)
thanks 4 sharin..:)

nikii · March 10, 2003, 10:54pm

wahhh chandoo zaberdastt :k:
thxs 4 sharing

superglue · March 10, 2003, 10:54pm

wow very nice..
Ye dukH nahi kay andherooN say sula'H ki huM nay
Malal ye hai kay ab subhA ki talaB bhi nahi

WiseGuy · March 10, 2003, 11:48pm

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Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

Hamay bohat hai ye "Sadat-e-ishQ" ki nisbat
Kay ye Qabeela asa kuM nasab bhi nahi
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Bohat khoob Chando Jee...
Thanks for sharing! :)

Paglee · March 10, 2003, 11:59pm

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Bohat khoob Chando Jee...
Thanks for sharing! :)
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hmmm tu ap yahan chupey bethy hain uuuuuuuuuuuuu..:(

WiseGuy · March 11, 2003, 12:18am

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hmmm tu ap yahan chupey bethy hain uuuuuuuuuuuuu..:(
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Aray chupey kahan, UN kee post per reply ker rahay na. ;)

Paglee · March 11, 2003, 12:21am

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WiseGuy · March 11, 2003, 4:56am

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Hey, Its not United Nations, you know what I mean…

Pramod · March 11, 2003, 5:37am

KamaaL shaks tha jis nay mujhay tabhA kiya
Kilaaf is kay hosakA ye dil ab bhi nahi

Ye dukH nahi kay andherooN say sula'H ki huM nay
Malal ye hai kay ab subhA ki talaB bhi nahi

Hisaabay darbadri tujh say maanG sakta hai
Gareeb shehr magar itnA beadaB bhi nahi

Very nice chand jii. aap kii choice hamesha se bahot achhi hai...Once again a great stuff from you...

thanks for sharing....

Dilsay · March 11, 2003, 5:50am

Great.... thanks for sharing....

dil ko laga hai....

_kashish · March 11, 2003, 7:05am

thats a beautiful peice !!

Philanthrope · March 11, 2003, 7:17am

Lovely!

_Masoom_Muskaan · March 11, 2003, 12:02pm

boht ache he Cc:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 11, 2003, 4:15pm

Beautiful, Thanks for sharing :-)

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 11, 2003, 7:47pm

beautiful:k::k:

chand_chehra · March 11, 2003, 10:48pm

Many Many thanks for liking it

chand_chehra · March 11, 2003, 10:50pm

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un kay kin kay ??