hamara kia hai?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HeArT_HaCKeR April 29, 2003, 7:32pm 1

hamara kia hai hum tu chiraagh-e-shub ki tarahh
jo jale bhee tu ittni roshni ho gi
k
jaise tund hawa-on ki raah mein jugnoo
zara see dair ko chumkay, chamak kur kho gay
phir is k baad kisi ko kuch na samjhaai de
na shub kate na suragh-e-saher dekhaai de

Azad April 29, 2003, 8:26pm 2

nice 1

ullujii April 29, 2003, 11:14pm 3

very nice :k:

Twister April 30, 2003, 1:25am 4

nice piece of poetry .....thnx for sharing!!!

Galaxy April 30, 2003, 3:08am 5

zabardast…keep it up:k:

Swera April 30, 2003, 3:21am 6

:)

_Nazish April 30, 2003, 3:45pm 7

wah…bohat khoob :k:

ghaurri April 30, 2003, 4:19pm 8

very nice...very deep...

keep it up

Capricorn April 30, 2003, 5:37pm 9

Re: hamara kia hai?

HH :k:

BrokenSky April 30, 2003, 5:57pm 10

Buhat Khoob:flower1:..

HeArT_HaCKeR May 1, 2003, 4:04pm 11

Re: Re: hamara kia hai?

thanx for liking pplz