HAMARA KIA HAI.........

hamara kyaa hai keh hum tou charagh-e-shab kii tarah
agar jalay bhii tou bus itni roshnii hogi
keh jaisay tund andhairon kii raah main jugnoo
zara sii dair ko chamkay chamak kay khoo jaye
phir uss kay baad kisi ko na kuch sujhayee day
na shab katay na suragh-e-sehar dikhayee day

hamara kyaa hai keh hum tou pas-e-ghubaar-e-safar
agar chalay bhi tou bas itnii raah tay hog
keh jaisay taiz hawaon kii zad main naqsh-e-qadam
zara sii dair k ubhray, ubhar kay mit jaaye
phir uss kay baad na rastaa na rah-guzar milay
had-e-nigah talak dasht-e-bekinaar milay

hamarii simt na dekho keh koii dair main hum
qabeela-e-dil-o-jaan say bicharrnay waalay hain
basay basaaye howay shehar apnii ankhon kay
misal-e-khaanaa-e-veeraan ujarrrnay walay hain
hawa kaa shor yehii hai tou dekhtay rehnaa
hamarii umar kay khaimay ukharrnay walay hain

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wah bohat zabardast :k:

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Intehaai shaandaar nazm hey, jitni taareef ki jaey kam hey :k: deadsoul thanx for sharing this poem with us :slight_smile:

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bohot hi ala bohot khuub.

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thx sonia

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buhat buhat shukrya amal sahab
app logo ki hosla afzayi ka

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thx sevenstar

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very nice… :k:

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thx prince

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:biggthumb

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wow..!! kitni pyaari nazm hai yeh

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its full of sadness. a person can almost touch n feel the exact moment of judaai. jaese wo lamha judai ka ik ehsas hi nahi, ek shayy ho.

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thx aqal less

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thx JW
and for deep comments

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bohat khoob deadsoul!
Always luv to read ur poetry selection:k:

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thx
for such a nice comment
buhat shukrya

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jawaaab nahe
jab bhe parha maza aya

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waqai main bemisaal hai perh k maza aagaya thanks 4 sharing

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shukrya tehreem