Amal
August 18, 2002, 5:21pm
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Hamaarey safar mein hamaarey saath bas dil’jali si fiza nahi
hamey rozgaar-e-hayaat ney kai majbooriyoN meiN jakarr diya
hamey dey ke hosh-e-aagahi yuN supurd-e-aazaab kia ke hum
terey intizaar meiN raat bhar hum shamma ke saath roey bhi
duwaeiN bhi keeN bohat magar tujhey dhoondney ke waastey
hameiN qismatoN ki kitaab ke har baab sey heiN shikayateiN
is dast-e-janooN ke haath sey bachaey rakhey sabhi ko Rub
By: Amal
Buhat Aa'la Amal jii
Hamaarey safar mein hamaarey saath bas dil’jali si fiza nahi
hamey dey ke hosh-e-aagahi yuN supurd-e-aazaab kia ke hum
Re: Hamaarey safar mein hamaarey saath
*Originally posted by Amal: *
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Hamaarey safar mein hamaarey saath bas dil’jali si fiza nahi
hamey dey ke hosh-e-aagahi yuN supurd-e-aazaab kia ke hum
terey intizaar meiN raat bhar hum shamma ke saath roey bhi
duwaeiN bhi keeN bohat magar tujhey dhoondney ke waastey
:flower1:hameiN qismatoN ki kitaab ke har baab sey heiN shikayateiN
is dast-e-janooN ke haath sey bachaey rakhey sabhi ko Rub
bohat khoob surat like always
hamey dey ke hosh-e-aagahi yuN supurd-e-aazaab kia ke hum
faqt phool ban kar khiley nahi, chiraagh ban kar jaley bhi heiN
kya baat hai ji :)
Nayab
August 19, 2002, 4:57am
5
Bohot khoob..humhe bohot pasand ahi…
:k:
zaberdast
bohet achaa zoq hai aapka...veri nice
it is great:flower1:
great choice of words and wonderful flow:k:
ASA
August 22, 2002, 1:00pm
12
very nice Amal… bouhat he acha… :k:
Amal
August 22, 2002, 1:47pm
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Thanx a lot Dur-e-Suman, CC, Zahid Sindhu, &Passionate and AsSweetAs :)
** Subhanallah**
Wow! i havent been to poetry forum in ages. But as soon as i entered this forum. I had to see your poem, Another one of your great work :~). I am hoping to see your book being published soon and hoping to get a copy from you :~).
jis khoobsurati sey ap ney yeh nazam likhi hai shayad hi merey pas kuch alfaaz hon :~)
Amal
August 25, 2002, 5:37pm
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Originally posted by nia_khan: * *
Wow! i havent been to poetry forum in ages. But as soon as i entered this forum. I had to see your poem, Another one of your great work :~). I am hoping to see your book being published soon and hoping to get a copy from you :~).
jis khoobsurati sey ap ney yeh nazam likhi hai shayad hi merey pas kuch alfaaz hon :~)
I’m most appreciative of your beautiful comments.Shabemah and nikii
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Nice one Amal. buhat hee khoobsurat as always :)
wah...
terey intizaar meiN raat bhar hum shamma ke saath roey bhi
Amal
August 28, 2002, 8:00pm
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[QUOTE]
terey intizaar meiN raat bhar hum shamma ke saath roey bhi
"yehi bohat hey ke dil us ko dhooNd laayaa hey
kisi ke saath sahi, wo nazar to aayaa hey
karuu.N shikaayate.n takataa rahuu.N........
gai bahaar ki soorat wo laot aayaa hey" :)
Shukhar hey BB aap dikhaai to deeN :) We understand your occupation and priorities;),
