ham to bachapan me.n bhii akele the

Truth_Is_Beauty · March 11, 2003, 6:13pm

ham to bachapan me.n bhii akele the
sirf dil kii galii me.n khele the

ek taraf morche the palako.n ke
ek taraf aa.Nsuuo.n ke rele the

thii.n sajii hasarate.n duukaano.n par
zindagii ke ajiib mele the

aaj zehan-o-dil bhuuko.n marate hai.n
un dino.n faake bhii ham ne jhele the

Khud-kashii kyaa Gamo.n kaa hal banatii
maut ke apane bhii sau jhamele the

system · March 11, 2003, 6:46pm

beautiful, :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 11, 2003, 7:45pm

nice work:k:

BrokenSky · March 11, 2003, 7:50pm

Nice:)
:k:

_MuNiYa · March 11, 2003, 7:54pm

lovely last line… :k:

weteyes82 · March 11, 2003, 10:33pm

nice :k:

chand_chehra · March 11, 2003, 10:39pm

Nice stuff :)

nikii · March 11, 2003, 11:21pm

:k:
truthy itnay dino baad wb

SunnyBoy · March 12, 2003, 12:37am

zabar10 :k:

Mehvar · March 12, 2003, 12:46am

hae mere bacchpen ke din :(

Truth_Is_Beauty · March 12, 2003, 6:43pm

thanx NIKKI:)..nice to se u once again:).thanx to all of u:)