ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

bheegiyaad March 20, 2008, 4:43pm 1

**Duniya ke loag khushiyaan manaane mein reh gaye **
**ham bad-nasiib ashk bahaane mein reh gaye **

**kuchh jaaN- nissaar aise bhi guzare hain dehr mein **
**mit kar bhi jinn ke naam, zamaane mein reh gaye **

**mismaar ho gayaa thaa mera ghar fasaad mein **
**taa- umr apnaa ghar hi banaane mein reh gaye **

**aansuu chhalak pare tau, khabar sab ko hi gayii **
**ham apne dil ke daagH chhipaane mein reh gaye **

**khud sar-baland ho na sake uumr-bhar kabhii **
apne hariif ko jo jhukaane mein reh gaye

**sikhaa nahiin zamaane se chhotaa sa ik sabak **
**taa-uumr duusron ko sikhaane mein reh gaye **

**apne hunar se aur tau zardaar ban gaye **
ham loag khote sikke chalaane mein reh gaye

**insaan bhi jalaaye gaye lakriyon ke saath **
ham hain k apni jaan bachaane mein reh gaye

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being_lonely March 20, 2008, 4:52pm 2

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

nice :k:

K337 March 20, 2008, 4:58pm 3

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nice:D

Shab-e-Hijar March 20, 2008, 5:03pm 4

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

very nice :k:

SinlneR March 20, 2008, 5:09pm 5

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

nice one.. zabardast !

Shumaisa March 20, 2008, 6:49pm 6

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

Bohattt khoob..

bheegiyaad March 20, 2008, 7:55pm 7

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

thanx

aabla_pa March 21, 2008, 9:05am 8

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

Bhot KhooB Janaab. Excellent Choice. :k:

muncho March 21, 2008, 1:24pm 9

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

khud sar-baland ho na sake uumr-bhar kabhii
apne hariif ko jo jhukaane mein reh gaye

sikhaa nahiin zamaane se chhotaa sa ik sabak
taa-uumr duusron ko sikhaane mein reh gaye

apne hunar se aur tau zardaar ban gaye
ham loag khote sikke chalaane mein reh gaye

so true

bheegiyaad March 21, 2008, 2:01pm 10

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

thanx

Precious_Khan March 21, 2008, 8:46pm 11

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

Buhat Aala :~)

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bheegiyaad March 21, 2008, 8:47pm 12

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

thanx PeeK

Precious_Khan March 21, 2008, 8:54pm 13

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

U R Always welcome :D

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Daanie March 25, 2008, 9:07am 14

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buhut khoob :)

muddii March 25, 2008, 12:19pm 15

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

Great:)

fizatiq March 25, 2008, 2:29pm 16

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

Nice........

Jhanjharewali March 27, 2008, 12:07pm 17

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

bahot khuub choice kuriye...esp these lines!

Angel_Onya March 27, 2008, 1:16pm 18

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dats great!!!

Ali_2 March 27, 2008, 1:27pm 19

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

Nice :k:

bheegiyaad March 27, 2008, 2:47pm 20

Re: ham hain k apni jaan bachanay mein rah gaey

again thanx eve 1