ham bahut khush the ke sheeshe ka makaan tore aaye

Koyal · July 19, 2004, 10:34am

***

tazkiraa gham kaa parhaa aur varq more aaye
vo kitaab us ke sirahaane hi khuli chor aaye

log bahate huwey daryaa meiN hamiN chor aaye
ham bhi daryaa ko samander ki taraf more aaye

zaKhm jo aaye haiN haathoN meiN vo bharte hi nahiN
ham bahut khush the ke sheeshe ka makaan tore aaye***

Seedha_Saada · July 19, 2004, 10:36am

Re: ham bahut khush the ke sheeshe ka makaan tore aaye

Wah kia zabardast kaam kiya hai :k:

Simba_Mamoo · July 19, 2004, 10:36am

mashaAllah

*zaKhm jo aaye haiN haathoN meiN vo bharte hi nahiN
ham bahut khush the ke sheeshe ka makaan tore aaye *

bahot khoob…

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 19, 2004, 10:48am

:k:..

K_Khan · July 19, 2004, 11:24am

nice logo :k:

cuteepie · July 19, 2004, 11:30am

very nice :k:

WiseGuy · July 19, 2004, 2:07pm

khoob :)

chand_chehra · July 20, 2004, 5:22am

Last shair is beautiful :k:

Burnished_Stone · July 20, 2004, 2:15pm

nice ghazal

Azad · July 21, 2004, 7:48am

zaKhm jo aaye haiN haathoN meiN vo bharte hi nahiN

Boray kaam ka bora nateeja

reet · July 22, 2004, 4:58am

Re: ham bahut khush the ke sheeshe ka makaan tore aaye

lovely…:k:

Koyal · July 30, 2004, 11:37pm

Re: Re: ham bahut khush the ke sheeshe ka makaan tore aaye

thanks..

Koyal · July 30, 2004, 11:38pm

bohat shukria

and welcome…

Koyal · July 30, 2004, 11:39pm

Koyal · July 30, 2004, 11:44pm

thanks logo

Koyal · July 30, 2004, 11:45pm

thanks…
thnaks Wg..stone ..cute and reet..

Koyal · July 30, 2004, 11:46pm