halki si ghazal

[redidentity]

Re: halki si ghazal

Buhat Khoob.. :)

[goodnews]

Re: halki si ghazal

@Jhanjharewali

aap ke dil mei kya hae bata dijiye

yuun na khamosh reh kar saza dijiye

ya to waada wafa aap puraa karen ya umeedon ki shamma bujha dijiye

aap ko chaah kar kuch na chaha kabhi meri chahat ka kuch toh silaa dijiye

phool murjha gayen aap ki chah mein muskura ke unhe phir khilaa dijiye

Lajwab

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: halki si ghazal

Thank u everyone. Shukriya Sid duaon ke liye :)

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: halki si ghazal

@rkopra

bahut logon nay mohabbtaain keen
bahut jhoothi se jhoothi theen
sirf kuch hi sachchi theen.
mar gayey sub vo log
mar gayeen unki mohabbatain.
kaaaun parhta hai unki
mohabbat ki daastaanain?

galti ho gayi, mauf karna.
jab apni mohabbat bharti nahin
to log baith jaatay hain
sun-nay mohabbat ki daastaanain
ya parhnay-likhnay baith jaatay hain
mohabbat ki nazmain aur ghazalain
ya suntay hain mohabbati-filmi gaanay.
yeh sub jhood jhood hain, jhood hain
lakin log khush hain, bahit khush hain
laggay hain apna dil behlaanay!

(how long is your epic by now?
or not yet started? or gave up?
ya abhi koee baat bani nahin
aur bahut bahut intzaar hai?)

***No comments ***

[SJ]

Re: halki si ghazal

@Jhanjharewali

aap ke dil mei kya hae bata dijiye

yuun na khamosh reh kar saza dijiye

ya to waada wafa aap puraa karen ya umeedon ki shamma bujha dijiye

aap ko chaah kar kuch na chaha kabhi meri chahat ka kuch toh silaa dijiye

phool murjha gayen aap ki chah mein muskura ke unhe phir khilaa dijiye

Bohat Khobsorat Ghazal hai.................
Its really Amazing......
AWesome....
:)

[Amal]

Re: halki si ghazal

@Jhanjharewali

aap ke dil mei kya hae bata dijiye
yuun na khamosh reh kar saza dijiye

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ya to waada wafa aap puraa karen
ya umeedon ki shamma bujha dijiye

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aap ko chaah kar kuch na chaha kabhi
meri chahat ka kuch toh silaa dijiye

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phool murjha gayen aap ki chah mein
muskura ke unhe phir khilaa dijiye

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Ghazal to bohat achi hey, lekin ye “halki si ghazal” ka kya matlab huwa

[bheegiyaad]

Re: halki si ghazal

nice ghazal
but meinney phoonk mari or urr gai yeh halki ghazal:cb:

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: halki si ghazal

@Amal

Ghazal to bohat achi hey, lekin ye “halki si ghazal” ka kya matlab huwa

halki si ghazal…jis ki sheron mein bahot khaas gehrai nahi…bass maze maze ki baatein :).
***btw…WHAT happened to ur avtaar ***

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: halki si ghazal

@bheegiyaad

nice ghazal
but meinney phoonk mari or urr gai yeh halki ghazal:cb:

***Moti kahin ki!!! ***

[BeyondHorizon]

Re: halki si ghazal

ossum

[being_lonely]

Re: halki si ghazal

Lo 30 Puray Kardon Replies Ash Karo :)

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: halki si ghazal

**SIDDDDD ** thank u for my first sticky thread

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: halki si ghazal

Very sweet si ghazal hey jhanjro wali kuri:-)

[being_lonely]

Re: halki si ghazal

abay yeh sticky thread nahi hia bus it turns into a hot thread with hot posts

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: halki si ghazal

@being_lonely

abay yeh sticky thread nahi hia bus it turns into a hot thread with hot posts

***kya pata ye sticky ki shuruaat ho ***