~Hairaan hoon us ne kyon mujhe khaarij nahee kiya~

Amarbail1 · May 22, 2003, 7:08pm

Ek koshish aap sab ki nazar…

Likh likh kar us ka naam mitaati rahi hoon mein
Yaadoon se ghar ko apne sajaati rahi hoon mein

Zaahir na hone paayain kaheen meri ranjishain
Har lehza saatheyoon ko hansaati rahi hoon mein

Waada wafa kiya na kabhi phir bhi jaane kyon
Najaane kyo us se aas lagaati rahi hoon mein

Kis ko pari hai jo mera pursaan-e-haal ho
So dil ko dil ka haal hi sunaati rahi hoon mein

Hairaan hoon us ne kyon mujhe khaarij nahee kiya
Halaan-keh apne aib sabhi jataati rahi hoon mein

Saansoon pe bas chale hai na dil pe hai ikhteyaar
Hai boojh zindagi, so uthaati rahi hoon mein

Be-hiss na kehne paaye koi iss ke khwaaf se
Khud apni hi ana ko dabaati rahi hoon aksar

chand_chehra · May 22, 2003, 8:53pm

very nice :k:
keep it up

Paglee · May 22, 2003, 9:24pm

nice

Swera · May 23, 2003, 2:31am

Bohat kamyab koshish hay :k:

Galaxy · May 23, 2003, 2:37am

nice try:)

Amarbail1 · May 23, 2003, 6:42am

Shukriya ...

Azad · May 23, 2003, 7:25am

Re: ~Hairaan hoon us ne kyon mujhe khaarij nahee kiya~

excellent … :k:

koiDost · May 23, 2003, 8:51am

Bohat he Khoob Sorat Koshish ki aap nay ..aesi koshishain karti rahain :)

Taymoor · May 23, 2003, 3:39pm

Kia kehnay…

beautiful

BrokenSky · May 23, 2003, 9:30pm

Buhat Khoob:k:…
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XkanwalX · May 24, 2003, 5:57pm

loved it.. :)

Golden_Scorpion · May 26, 2003, 8:30am

Likh likh kar us ka naam mitaati rahi hoon mein
Yaadoon se ghar ko apne sajaati rahi hoon mein

WOW... Gr8 :biggthumb

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 15, 2003, 8:09pm

awesome:k::k:

Amarbail1 · June 16, 2003, 5:35am

Thanks all...