haaye vo vaqt-e-judaa_ii ke tumhaare aa.Nsuu

Dilsay · April 6, 2003, 7:23pm

I know i am not suppose to post more thn two posting per day… but i like this one and hope evey body will like this so Mod please forgive me for corssing the limit…

haaye vo vaqt-e-judaa_ii ke tumhaare aa.Nsuu
gir ke daaman pe bane the jo sitaare aa.Nsuu

laal-o-gauhar ke Khazaane hai.n ye saare aa.Nsuu
ko_ii aa.Nkho.n se churaa le na tumhaare aa.Nsuu

[laal-o-gauhar = rubies and pearls (precious gems)]

terii aa.Nkho.n me.n agar ho.n to sitaare aa.Nsuu
merii aa.Nkho.n me.n agar ho.n to bechaare aa.Nsuu

in ko ‘Nasir’ na kabhii aa.Nkh se girane denaa
un ko lagate hai.n merii aa.Nkh me.n pyaare aa.Nsuu

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 6, 2003, 9:50pm

:k:

Dilsay · April 7, 2003, 5:18am

Thanks alot now a days i just get few replies on my post and each reply is important for me like past… thanks alot…

Amal · April 7, 2003, 2:19pm

Dilsay bhai bohat piyaari ghazal hey. Thanx for sharing.

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Thanks alot now a days i just get few replies on my post...
[/QUOTE]

I maybe all wrong, but I always believe that "qadar
kho deta hey roz ka aana jaana"...matlab, if you
post one piece or two pieces everyday, replies will
get more fewer. Aek dostaana mashwara, ziaada post
karney ki bajaey ziaada posts parrhney ki koshish karo:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 7, 2003, 6:30pm

i think Amal is right:)
dekha nahi jub bhi Amal post karta hai to uska topic 2 pages per to zaror jate hai meaning more than 30 people likes his poetry.the first reason is ke woh aik month mein do per post karta hai:) and the second reason is that his poetry is a masterpiece:k:

i think first time kese ko itna lamba reply kia hai:bummer:
anyways meray rules mein thanks nahi tha:teary1:
if i said anything stupid then hope that u don’t mind:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · April 7, 2003, 6:55pm

:k: Very niceeeeeee Dilsay bhai jaaaaan thanx for sharing :k::k:

WiseGuy · April 8, 2003, 7:09pm

Nice!
Agar aisee hee post hain tu aap jitni marzi post kijiay...
Kyu keh kahbi kabhi acha paRhnay ko bhi dil kerta na

Azad · April 9, 2003, 2:03pm

Re: haaye vo vaqt-e-judaa_ii ke tumhaare aa.Nsuu

wah kia tabahi seletion hay … thanks :k:

2nd
waisay dilsay uss ki bhainss jitni aankhon main jab aansu aain gay to aik ansu say aik balti to bhar jati hogi

Capricorn · April 9, 2003, 2:06pm

Nice one :k:
PS: Post karne kee itnee bhee kia jaldee thee, kal kar lete

Azad · April 9, 2003, 2:11pm

kal baltti bhar aanu kahan say miltay nahanay ko

Dilsay · April 9, 2003, 2:32pm

Thanks every one....

Doobti_Kashti · April 9, 2003, 9:20pm

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_Nazish · April 9, 2003, 9:24pm

zabardast choice :k:
bohat khoob.

Dilsay · April 10, 2003, 1:57pm

Thanks again

Azad · April 10, 2003, 2:02pm

yahan say phir guzrna howa … waqee khoob hay … :k:

Dilsay · April 10, 2003, 6:48pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
**Dilsay* bhai bohat piyaari ghazal hey. Thanx for sharing.

I maybe all wrong, but I always believe that "qadar
kho deta hey roz ka aana jaana"...matlab, if you
post one piece or two pieces everyday, replies will
get more fewer. Aek dostaana mashwara, ziaada post
karney ki bajaey ziaada posts parrhney ki koshish karo:)
[/QUOTE]

Thanks alot and i will keep your advise in mind... always good to have your reply...

Dilsay · April 10, 2003, 6:49pm

Thanks for writing this much for me i am really touched…

Dilsay · April 10, 2003, 6:50pm

Thanks

Dilsay · April 10, 2003, 6:51pm

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*Originally posted by Doobti_Kashti: *
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[/QUOTE]

Thanks

Philanthrope · April 10, 2003, 7:15pm

Wah... Very nice..