HAATH UTHAYE UT........

rabia_rana · April 3, 2006, 9:30am

haath uthaye tu teray lab pay dua ho jaon
tujh ko mil jaon tu aisay kay hwa ho jaon

teri ankhon mai mery aks mery manzar chamkain
teray honton mai simat ker mai sada ho jaon

sard raton ki sulagti hui tanhai mai
gunj ban ker uthon tujh mai or anna ho jaon

ouj per aaj meri arzoo ka rang aya
teray liye mao mahak rut ki nwa ho jaon

apnay RAB say tu yehi aik dua mangi hai
teray jeevan mai rahon werna fana ho jaon

mai zindagi hon mujhay dhond mat veranon mai
ye na ho kay mai phir tujh say khafa ho jaon

*** ghazal by..HAYA SHAH(RABIA RANA)***

Prince_Ali · April 3, 2006, 3:39pm

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Buhut khub Rabia ji :k:

Zamil · April 3, 2006, 10:44pm

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Zabardast Rabia G !
Aap ka alfaaz ka chunaao or un ki placement bohat achhi hai. Sivaaye ek do misron k poori ghazal mein wazan ki kaifiyat bhi behtareen hai. You got the potential jo aap ko InshaAllah aage le jaaye ga. Keep it up!!!
*Bohat pyari ghazal hai.:) *

Amal · April 8, 2006, 12:58pm

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Rabia welcome to GS…aap ki ghazal bohat shaandaar hey…or should I say, bohat jaandaar hey. We look forward to see more of your work. Thanx for sharing this ghazal with us

being_lonely · April 11, 2006, 11:06am

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its so cuteeeeeeeeeee n toucheeee plz keep sharing asta lavista:)

rabia_rana · August 9, 2006, 8:52am

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thanx frnds

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 9, 2006, 3:05pm

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Boht khoob. :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 9, 2006, 7:13pm

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beautiful!

Muslim_girl_1 · August 9, 2006, 8:49pm

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very nice Rabia g........

rabia_rana · February 9, 2007, 9:27am

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thanx again

Mysterious_Woman · February 9, 2007, 10:50am

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welcome to GS - and must say poetry is great!