haath meray bhool baithay dastakain denay ka fun

haath meray bhool baithay dastakain denay ka funn
bund mujh pur jub se uskay ghar ka darwaaza hua

rail ke seeti mein kaisi hijr ki tamheed thee
us ko rukhsat kar ke lotay jub, tau andaaza hua

Re: haath meray bhool baithay dastakain denay ka fun

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very beautifull ....touching

Capricorn - thankyou.....that was so nice of you...

KhanFarhad - thanx a lot........it adds to encouragment...:)

rail seetti hummm

haan rail setti humm....:):)

Re: haath meray bhool baithay dastakain denay ka fun

Very nice… Especially the second one… :flower1:

Nice …:k:

thanx a lot KhamoshNigahein and Amarbail.....

thanx Amarbail n Khamoshnigahein…:flower1:

Zabar dast khush rahoo...

thanx a lot Dilsay....(dilsay)...:)

wah its amazing mehrtaab ap nay tu mehfil loot li thanks 4 sharing!

thanx a lot Lamhay…:flower1: :flower1: :flower1:

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thanx Ghazal and cuteepie