haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

Jo tera dour-e-urooj hai wohi mera waqt-e-zawaal hai
Mein hun fanna kai safar mein, mujhay rokna mohaal hai

kis say poocho’n yeh dastaan, mera gahar kese jal gaya
haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

kabhi chupkay chupkay ro diya, kabhi khil khila k hans diya
jis ki chup say sab ro diye isay guftagoo pay bhi kamal hai

meri nus nus mai thi ashiquee , main ser ta pa tha zindagi
meri wafa pay hi uthien ungliyan mujhay is baat ka malal hai

barso’n raha main muntazir, wo meri halto’n say bekhabar
os pay qismat nay diya yeh samar , lamha bhar ka hoa visaal hay

jisay yaad kiya har pal, jis k naam hoi meri har ghazal
meri soch mai hai jo shaam o saher osay kisi aur ka khayal hai

                                                                          by sodaii

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

:s

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

bohut khoob ....

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

Assalamo alaikum Azad

Bohat shukrya janab
Khush rahiye
Allah Hafiz
Sodaii

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

koi bat nahi

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

This poem resembles one of Parveen Shakirs works so much :-S Anyhow.. nice effort you made! :k:

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

khayalat ka takrao ho gaya ho ga un say :$ hadisa'tun , warna kahan main aur kahan parveen aunty :$

wese ghor say parhnay ka shukriya .. yeh usi ghazal ko zara doosray style say likha hai .. laiken likha khudh hi hay :$

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

Its Beautiful… Very Nice :flower2:

Re: haath mai angaar liye , har shakhus sarapa sawal hai

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thank you janab!!