haal usakaa tere chehare pe likhaa lagataa hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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haal usakaa tere chehare pe likhaa lagataa hai
vo chup chaap kha.Daa hai teraa kyaa lagataa hai

yuu.N to har chiiz salaamat hai merii duniyaa me.n
ek ta’alluq hai jo TuuTaa huaa lagataa hai

mai.n ne sochaa thaa ke aabaad huu.N ek shahar me.n mai.n
yaa.N to har shaKhs kaa a.ndaaz judaa lagataa hai

moddate.n biit gaii.n tay na huii ma.nzil-e-shauq
ek aalaam mere raste me.n pa.Daa lagataa hai

ai mere jazbaa-e-dauro.n mujh me.n kashish hai itanii
jo khaataa hotaa hai vo tiir bhii aa lagataa hai

jaane kaun sii pastii me.n giraa huu.N “Shehzad”
suuraj bhii is qadar duur hai ke diyaa lagataa hai

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Re: haal usakaa tere chehare pe likhaa lagataa hai

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

jaane kaun sii pastii me.n giraa huu.N "Shehzad"
suuraj bhii is qadar duur hai ke diyaa lagataa hai
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Bohat hoob surat ghazal hai, but :(

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Re: Re: haal usakaa tere chehare pe likhaa lagataa hai

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*Originally posted by Swera: *

Bohat hoob surat ghazal hai, but :(
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thanks alot and now a days on my postings i only get one or two replies.... thanks kisi ko tu pasand aya....

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zabardast :k:

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khoob :k: keep writing

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Bohat khoob Dilsay :)

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wah wah......lagta hae kise nae dilsay hi likhi hae;).........

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nice1:k:

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jaane kaun sii pastii me.n giraa huu.N “Shehzad”
suuraj bhii is qadar duur hai ke diyaa lagataa hai

:k:

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Thanks every one