Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

deep_ocean September 4, 2007, 4:28am 1

Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko
Ungliyaan Pheir Kar Baloun Mein, Sula Dey Mujh Ko

Jiss Trah Faaltu Guldaan Parey Rehtey Hein
Apney Ghar Key Kisi Koney Sey Laga Dey Mujh Ko

Doobtey Doobtey Aawaz Teri Sun Jaoun
Akhri Baar Toh Sahil Sey Sada Dey Mujh Ko

Main Tery Hijar Mein Chup Chap Na Mar JAoun Kahein
Main Hun Saktey Mein, Kabhi Aaa Kar Rula Dey Mujh Ko

Dekh Main Ho Gya Hun Badnaam Kitboun Ki Tarha
Meri Tashheer Na Kar, Ab To Jala Dey Mujh Ko

Roothna Tera, Meri Jaan Liye Jata HAi
Aisey Naraz Na Ho, Hans K Dikha Dey Mujh Ko

Log Kehtey Hein K Yeh Ishq Nigal Jata HAi
Main Bhi Is Ishq Mein Aya Houn, Duaa De Mujh Ko

Yahi Auqaat Hai Meri Teray Jeevan Mein
Koi Kamzore Sa Lamha Houn, Bhula De Mujh Ko

redidentity September 4, 2007, 5:30am 2

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Very Nice.. :)

Shumaisa September 4, 2007, 5:57am 3

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Buhat khoob.. :k:

SJ September 4, 2007, 7:37am 4

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

deep_ocean:

Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Ungliyaan Pheir Kar Baloun Mein, Sula Dey Mujh Ko

Jiss Trah Faaltu Guldaan Parey Rehtey Hein Apney Ghar Key Kisi Koney Sey Laga Dey Mujh Ko

Doobtey Doobtey Aawaz Teri Sun Jaoun Akhri Baar Toh Sahil Sey Sada Dey Mujh Ko

Main Tery Hijar Mein Chup Chap Na Mar JAoun Kahein Main Hun Saktey Mein, Kabhi Aaa Kar Rula Dey Mujh Ko

Dekh Main Ho Gya Hun Badnaam Kitboun Ki Tarha Meri Tashheer Na Kar, Ab To Jala Dey Mujh Ko

Roothna Tera, Meri Jaan Liye Jata HAi Aisey Naraz Na Ho, Hans K Dikha Dey Mujh Ko

Log Kehtey Hein K Yeh Ishq Nigal Jata HAi Main Bhi Is Ishq Mein Aya Houn, Duaa De Mujh Ko

Yahi Auqaat Hai Meri Teray Jeevan Mein

Koi Kamzore Sa Lamha Houn, Bhula De Mujh Ko

beautifuly written by wasi shah..........
Amazing ghazal.........
first shair tu ghazab ka hai:)

deep_ocean September 4, 2007, 8:52am 5

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Thanks Ahmer

Thanks Shumaisa

thanks Soniaa_jee

tum_bin_1 September 4, 2007, 11:23am 6

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Very Nice :k:

seem September 4, 2007, 1:57pm 7

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

DEEP OCEAN.....U R ALWAYS BEST.

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Amal September 4, 2007, 2:36pm 8

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

What a lovely ghazal deep_ocean k:

deep_ocean September 4, 2007, 3:25pm 9

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

I am honored

Thanks for appreciation **Amal
**

Prince_Ali September 4, 2007, 4:28pm 10

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko
Ungliyaan Pheir Kar Baloun Mein, Sula Dey Mujh Ko

kya kehna :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan September 4, 2007, 6:50pm 11

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

moshkel urdu he uncle :(

NikamiJano September 4, 2007, 9:53pm 12

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

ye unkil kahaN hai Mm ye tu antie haiN na :D

nice one ocean :)

deep_ocean September 5, 2007, 5:00am 13

Re: Gungunatey Huye Aanchal Ki Hawa Dey Mujh Ko

Itni bhi mushkil nahin hai uncle ki bhateeji

not antie at least

abhi to main naujawan hoon

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