LP
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pakiza mohabbat ko gunahgar na karna
tum pyaar tou karna magar izhaar na karna!!
qurbani ka jazba tumhe veersey mein mila hai
wo jaan bhi agar mangey tou inkaar na karna!!.
suraat sey bari cheez hai mehboob ki siraat
aawara hawa’un sey kabhi pyaar na karna!!
aashkun mein na behjayen kahin gham ka khazana
soowey hoye tufaan ko bedaar na karna!!
Fbi786
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
LP in Intikhab Section and not Cafe :O:
Hey LP
Did you write this yourself? Wow its thought provoking and to the point.
LP
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
Fbi in intekhab 
No,I dont write,I only read 
I really loved it.
Fbi786
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
Oh yeah its a shocker.. i am only here cos i seen you :D
Its beautiful .. i read it too
I recently made a 'for limited time only' comeback.
LP
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
Limited time kyo ?
Try out other sections,some are interesting.Are you into poetry of any kind ?
Fbi786
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
Yeh .. I was bored for a few weeks.. Family in Pakistan ...and had alot of time on hands.. so thought i drop by.
Limited cos in a weeks time .. its Ramadhan ..and in that i wont be around.. but will be after it.
Yeh ..i am but what puts me off is the roman english which annoys me..if its written in urdu then yeh i ll read it anywhere. I just dont express it ..
LP
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
I find it tough to read urdu :(
I prefer Roman.
Ill be off too during ramadhan and might be traveling soon too.
What kinda poetry do you like ?
Re: Gunahgar na karna
qurbani ka jazba tumhe veersey mein mila hai
wo jaan bhi agar mangey tou inkaar na karna!!.
wo mobile bhi agar mange to inkar na karna :nono:
Lilly
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
suraat sey bari cheez hai mehboob ki siraat
aawara hawa’un sey kabhi pyaar na karna!!
Nice :k:
LP
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
Jaan dey doongi…mobile kabhi nahi 
Thanks 
LP
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
Laptop se barh k mera sahara hai mobile:snooty:
Re: Gunahgar na karna
aap ka to charger kharab hai na.... laptop to theek hai suna tha
LP
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Re: Gunahgar na karna
Haan…but mobile can be used hur jagah…laptop nai use krti wen khala n all around…so mobile zyadah sahara hua 
Re: Gunahgar na karna
bat to achi hai leken martay sabhi soorat pe hain, baad main jaa k kahen khayal ata hai ke sirat bhi honi chaheay
Re: Gunahgar na karna
Bohat Khoob.....
**suraat sey bari cheez hai mehboob ki siraat
aawara hawa'un sey kabhi pyaar na karna!!
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