gumsum

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Dil gumsum hai zuban khamosh aaj aankhen atni num kyion hain
**tujhe to kabhi paya hi na tha phir aaj khone ka gum kyion hain :slight_smile: **

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Very nice Rubab999 :k: … Welcome to GS :slight_smile:

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har kali tujh se phool udhar mange
aasman tujh se noor udhar mange
rub karee tu dosti nibhaye aaise
log mujh se tere dosti udhar mange :blush:

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Technicalities apart, it’s a pretty impressive piece composition wise :k: Thanx for sharing and keep it up :slight_smile:

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Taleem ki rahoon me loog melte hain bichher jate hain
woh Lamhat kitne hussain hote hain jo guzar jate hain

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Bhula sakti to kab ka bhula diya hota
mita sakti to kab ka mita diya hota
tumhen kia pata kitna dard deti hain yeh yadeen
bata sakti to kab ka bata diya hota

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Very nice :clap:

I feel like im being forced to change, what shall i do>?
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nice1! thanx for sharing

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Very nice :k:

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**wah wah rubab g buhat khoub ...... yaad aaya

Aaj to baysabab udaas hay geeee
Ishaq Hota to baat bhi thi ....**

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thanks for likeing

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Aankhon pey aanson ki lakeer ban gahi
kabhi na sochha tha aesi taqder ban gahi
hum ne to pheri thi yon hi reet par ungliyaan
goor se dekha teri taaswer ban gahi

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*Dil gumsum hai zuban khamosh aaj aankhen atni num kyion hain
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very nice!