Gumshuda Manziloon Key Talash Main

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Sannan August 3, 2006, 2:58am 1

Meray Doost **Darwesh **Kay naam Jiss Nay Mujhay Qalam Uthanay Par Majboor Kar Dia hay ….

Gumshuda Manziloon Key Talash Main
Kabhi Niklo
To Jaan lo Gay
Kah Hum Jaisay Khanabadoosh
Keon Loot Kar Naheen Aatay!

Zamil August 3, 2006, 3:05am 2

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Acha kaha...Mukhtasir or sacha kaha... :)

Darwesh jee...ye kya zulm kar dia shaairy par ye to "radeef ki aaisi taisi" kar dete hain... ;)

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Sannan August 3, 2006, 3:35am 3

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hahahaha bus aab darwesh ko he pakro yaar
Waisay yaar main Zyada time to barbaad naheen karta hoon aap loogoon ka :peshow:

Men & Arranged Marriages

jhansi_ki_rani August 3, 2006, 7:10am 4

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sanan g simply nice , bohat khooob

darwesh August 3, 2006, 11:32pm 5

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"** Iss Tarha To Hota Hai... Iss Tarha Ki Shairee Main" Ki Karaaaaan !**

KAHIYE KAHIYE MUJHE BURA KAHIYE.

dARWESH.

Mein wapis!

Muslim_girl_1 August 4, 2006, 1:14am 6

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very very nice Sannan bhai......and i love that image.......it's lovely
Keep up the gud work.......

goodnews August 4, 2006, 1:24am 7

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Originally Posted by **Zamil** ***Acha kaha...Mukhtasir or sacha kaha...** :)* *----------* ***Darwesh jee...ye kya zulm kar dia shaairy par ye to "radeef ki aaisi taisi" kar dete hain...** ;)*

DASH JI sharminda na hon.:D
Snnan tu larkon ka "Perveen Shaikr" hy,(Like I am the Mula Jut (VERSION)of khwateen:D )
For Example,(Engrazi ky bina tum logon ka guzara nahi)
Zamil sahib Redef btana khan hy yah ok:) nAZAM KA NAM HY,

Aik din chilchilati dhOOp ( By: Parveen Shakir)

"Aik din chilchilati dhop main
bas number 60 sy utrty hoy
os ki nazar aik pyr pr pari *{PYR:Tree HY khin PEER Pgara samjho}
*tu isy dafter main rakhi gai**
nai typesit ka khiyal a giya
os din osy ehsas hoa
ky duniya aik admi pr mushtamil nahi hy
[RIGHT]Baso buhat hansa"[/RIGHT]
Umeed hy pasand ay gi.Shukriya

darwesh August 4, 2006, 1:34am 8

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G-N..Ji.... Zindabaad,
Kiya Baat Hai...Sath Hi Baat Se Kiya Baat Hai... Subhanallah !
Sannan Ki Parveen Shakir se Rishadari Khoob Hai.
Magar...Khudara Aap Mujhe Yeh DASH Na Likha Karen, Na Main Itna Dashing
Na Anglo-Pakistaani, Darweshi par karam karen.

Aapka Darwesh.

Muslim_girl_1 August 4, 2006, 1:36am 9

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goodnews that's very true k duniya sirf aik admi per mustamil nahi hai.....nice poem...

goodnews August 4, 2006, 1:41am 10

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thanks a lot, Muslim Girl
han duniy aaik bandy pr mushtamil nahi hy, isi liy tu shair ny kha
Koi tu ho ju meri wahshaton ka sathi ho.

goodnews August 4, 2006, 1:45am 11

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Shukriya DASH ji,Sannan or Parveen Shakir main mumaslat ko srahny ka.Dosri bat "DASH" ka jhan tak taluq hy tu Main ny socha yhan her aik ky nick ka Mukhafaf hy ap ny nick aysa chuna k koi mukhafaf na kr sky magr tlash kr he liya ham ny.I guess yeh ap ki shakhsiyat sy bilkul milta hy. Ap inkisari sy kam ly rhy hain.Hamin tu yehi ach laga:)

Zamil August 4, 2006, 2:17am 12

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Mohtarma jee, mujhe pata hai ye nazm hai, radeef ka zikr kar k main ne ek purani baat ka hawaala dia tha jo k Sannan jee bakhubi samajh gaye.
**Or aapko samjhaane ka abhi mera mood nahi ho raha… **

goodnews August 4, 2006, 2:26am 13

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Muhtram blk Buzurgo:D (Senior Citizen of gupshup)!Hamara bhi samajhny ka koi mood nahi ho rha. Ham ny tu yeh Nazam sunani thi suna di.

BRIDAL PICS.

goodnews August 5, 2006, 7:22pm 14

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Where is edit button gone:( koi jin hy yhan pr aksar cheezin ghaib ho jatinhain:((

darwesh August 5, 2006, 8:13pm 15

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G-N..ji...Smile !

Sar Tasleem Kham Hia Jo Mizaaj E Yaar Main Aaye.

waise bhi......ZIKR MERA MUJH SE BEHTAR HAI KE ISS MAHFIL MAIN HAI.

dARWESH.

goodnews August 5, 2006, 8:27pm 16

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Wah DASH ji kia andazy sukhan hy! Ghalib ny ap hi jysy logon k bary main frmaya hy,
**Bat gua k phool jharty hain **
Woh khin or suna kry koi
**(* is shyr ky bary main dar hy ky yaddasht ny sath na diya hu tu ghalat na likh gai hon magar umeed hy bat samajh main a jay gi:))*
[RIGHT]Adab Arz.[/RIGHT]

goodnews August 6, 2006, 3:39am 17

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Khub Sannan ki bat samjh main a gai aj"refer to neel ky sahil sy ly kr tabkhaky kahshghar"

HeArT_HaCKeR August 6, 2006, 10:11am 18

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Very nice. thanks for sharing.

Sannan August 8, 2006, 2:57am 19

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Thanks Rani, H.A., GN u send some nice she'r and MG Bahan thanks for ur encouragement abt Sceneries ...i know my poetry is so but i work hard a lot Baqoal Darwesh G lace & ??? heheh ....
anyway thanks for liking and now i'm thinking to present some long nazam ...hahhaha ... aab yah aap logoon key bardashat par hay

Muslim_girl_1 August 10, 2006, 5:09pm 20

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^^ hehe