Gum’Sum Khara Tha Aik Shajar, Dasht-e-Khauf Main..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity December 19, 2007, 4:55pm 1

Aik Ghazal,

Baaghi Main Aadmi Se Na Munkir Khuda Ka Tha
Der’paish Mas’ala Meri Apni Anaa Ka Tha

Gum’Sum Khara Tha Aik Shajar, Dasht-e-Khauf Main
Shaayad Wo Muntazir Kisi Andhi Hawa Ka Tha

Apnay Dhuain Ko Chhor Gaya Wo Aasmaan Per
Bujh’tay Huay Deay Main Ghuruur Inteha Ka Tha

Dekha To Wo Haseen Laga Saaray Sheher Main
Socha To Wo Zaheen Bhi Zaalim Bala Ka Tha

Lehra Raha Tha Kal Jo Sir-E-Shaakh Be’libaas
Daaman Ka Taar Tha Ke Wo Parcham Saba Ka Tha

Uss Ko Ghilaaf-E-Rooh Main Rakha Sam’bhaal Ker
Mohsin Wo Zakhm Bhi To Kisi Aashna Ka Tha

(Mohsin Naqwi)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

bheegiyaad December 19, 2007, 5:14pm 2

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too gud :k:

Aryaan December 19, 2007, 5:36pm 3

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Beautiful sharing** Ahmer**..:k:

Shab-e-Hijar December 19, 2007, 8:21pm 4

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Mohsin woh zakhm bhi to kisi ashna ka tha … wah … boaht khoob :k:

sunny_nicky December 19, 2007, 11:24pm 5

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nicee :)

Jhanjharewali December 20, 2007, 12:34am 6

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*REDIDENTITY.....I THINK I'LL VOTE THIS TO BE THE 'BEST THREAD OF THE YEAR'!!
cheeer gaya seedhe dil tak ko :).....beautiful!
*

NikamiJano December 20, 2007, 3:57am 7

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v nice sharing :)

Last Person Who Posted Here Will Be Da CoOlest Member Of Gp =G - >>

Starlight December 20, 2007, 7:13am 8

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buhat ala!

Cafe ke Baithak - MAy

redidentity December 20, 2007, 3:43pm 9

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thnx bheegi, aryaan, shab, starlight, sunny n Nikami jee..

redidentity December 20, 2007, 3:49pm 10

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zarra nawazi hai aapki JJW..

em so happy..

Berhi_Bee December 22, 2007, 6:59pm 11

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zebardast !! :)

2 Likes

;) Choose A Profession 4 Above Person ;)

Koyal December 23, 2007, 2:50am 12

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:k: nice sharing:)

redidentity December 23, 2007, 11:36am 13

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thnx berhi_bee, n Koyal :)

Jhanjharewali December 23, 2007, 12:23pm 14

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**sharmate huwe aur achhe lagte ho aap **:CareBear:

padfoot December 23, 2007, 2:25pm 15

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One my vote too :) It is superb!

moonmine December 23, 2007, 3:44pm 16

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Zabardast sharing...

deadsoul December 23, 2007, 9:56pm 17

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zabardast

redidentity December 24, 2007, 6:21am 18

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lolx

redidentity December 24, 2007, 6:21am 19

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thnx alot padfoot, moonmine and DS jee :)