abhi abhi amal ki aik gazal perhtey hovey zehn mein yeh poem aaye thee, soocha aap loogun sey share keroon. i hope u like it.
**Gulshan-e-yaad **mein ger aaj ** dam-e-baad-e-saba **
phir sey chahey key **gul fishan **ho to ho janey do
**umer-rafta **key kissi taaq pey basra hova derd
phir sey chahey key **feroozan **ho tu ho janey do
jeisey beigaaney sey miltey ho waisey hi sahih
aayoo do char gherri merey muqabil beithu
gerchey mil beithein gey ham tum tu
apna ehssas-zyaan aur bhi zyada ho ga
ham sukhan hoon gey ju lab tu her ik baat key beech
an-kahi baat ka mahoom sa perda ho ga
koi iqraar na mein yaad dilayoon ga na tum
koi mazmoon wafa ka na jaffa ka ho ga
aur gerdish-ayyaam ki tehreer ko dhooney key lye
tum sey goya hoon gi dam-e-deed ju meri palkien
tum ju chahoo tu sunno ju na chahoo na sunno
aur ju herf kerien gureizaan mugh sey aankhien
tum ju chahoo tu kaho ju na chahoo na kahoo
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*Originally posted by chodhry: *
abhi abhi amal ki aik gazal perhtey hovey zehn mein yeh poem aaye thee, soocha aap loogun sey share keroon. i hope u like it.
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chodhry sahab ye to aap ziaadti kar rahey heiN merey saath! Bhala meri ghazal parhtey huwey Faiz sahab ka koi kalaam aap ke zehan meiN kesey aa sakta hey. Zameen aur aasmaan meiN kuch to farq rehney deejeye warna log aap ke aql-o-shaoor par shaq karney lageiN ge ;) Anyway, thanx for reading my ghazal and double thanx for posting this masterpiece of Faiz. I love this poem. One of my favrouites from the guru.
Re: Re: Gulshan-e-yaad mein ger aaj dam-e-baad-e-saba
Amal jee logun ka ta kaam hi batien kerna hey, logun ki perwa kia kerna. jesiey feel kia bata dya. ju yaad aya suna dya, ju acha lagga keh dia.. baqqi zameen aur asman milaney wali baaat ka tu yahi kahoon ga key Faiz sahib bhi inni sari azmat saath ley ker peida nahein hovey they, unhun ney bhi kahien sey tu shuru kia ho ga… n i think u got what it takes. bas dattey rhein. aaap ney jis khubsurti sey lafzoon ko use kia tha its awesome. I really liked it and i really wish to develop tht kind of skill. :k: