Gulab

[babri]

Being Lonely (sid) bahi k naam jo kehte hain k GS main un ko yaad nahi kiya jaata.

Ek gulab tha
Bara udas tha
Rang bhee us ka tha kuch ora ora sa
Shabnam k ansoo rawan thet us k
Dil tha us ka kuch bujha bujha sa
Bahar ka tha mosam phir bhee na khila tha
Dali se tha wo apni kuch jhuka jhuka sa
Main ne jo dekha use
Pass ja k pocha use
Kion hai udas tu?
Kion karta hai dil bardad tu?
Kis ko karta hai yaad tu?
Ye sun kar wo rone laga
Shabnam k ansoon se mooh dhoney laga
Or rotey rotey bas ye kehney laga
Mera yaar mujh ko chor gaya hai
Mera pyaar muj s mooh mor gaya hai
Ab main kis k liye khushboo mahkaoon?
Mujh kon apne dil se lagey ga
Mera chaman ojar gaya hai
Mera yaar muj se bichar gaya hai
Bas ab to her lamhey us ki yaad hai
Bas beqarari hai, tarap hai faryad hai
Mujh ko koi mere yaar se mila dey
Mujh ko koi mera pyaar lota dey
Wo ayey ga to khil jaoon ga maiN
Apni zindegi se mil jaoon ha maiN

[Amal]

Re: Gulab

Nice dedication savenstar2003 :k: I hope ke Being Lonely will be a happy person now

[tahreem_saeed]

Re: Gulab

sid aab to aaajao itna keh rahe hain sab nice dedication saat sitarey bhai

[redidentity]

Re: Gulab

:( Koi Mujhe Yaad Kion Nahi Kerta :(

PS: Nice Poem :)

[babri]

Re: Gulab

sid aab to aaajao itna keh rahe hain sab nice dedication saat sitarey bhai

Thanks Tahreem saeed jii.

[babri]

Re: Gulab

:( Koi Mujhe Yaad Kion Nahi Kerta :(

PS: Nice Poem :)

Redidentity app ko bi yaad karne wale yaad karte hoon gey jahan tak hai humari baat toh hum her ek ko yaad karte hain.
Thanks.

[babri]

Re: Gulab

@Amal

Nice dedication savenstar2003 :k: I hope ke Being Lonely will be a happy person now

Thanks Amal.

[taliba2007]

Re: Gulab

Muskaan k naam nahi kiya 7star sahab?
bohot achi poem hai.

[Muslim_girl_1]

Re: Gulab

Wo ayey ga to khil jaoon ga maiN
Apni zindegi se mil jaoon ha maiN
Beautiful poem:k:
BL: aab toh aap khush hain na k sab ko yaad kerte hain…!!!

[babri]

Re: Gulab

Thank you MG

[babri]

Re: Gulab

Sid bai app ka koi reply nahi hai yahan app ne pari nahi ya app ko pasand nahi ai isliye reply nahi kiya---?

[SJ]

Re: Gulab

Bohat khoob Janab !!!!!!!!!!!!
:)

[babri]

Re: Gulab

Thank you SJ.

[being_lonely]

Re: Gulab

Being Lonely (sid) bahi k naam jo kehte hain k GS main un ko yaad nahi kiya jaata.

Ek gulab tha Bara udas tha Rang bhee us ka tha kuch ora ora sa Shabnam k ansoo rawan thet us k Dil tha us ka kuch bujha bujha sa Bahar ka tha mosam phir bhee na khila tha Dali se tha wo apni kuch jhuka jhuka sa Main ne jo dekha use Pass ja k pocha use Kion hai udas tu? Kion karta hai dil bardad tu? Kis ko karta hai yaad tu? Ye sun kar wo rone laga Shabnam k ansoon se mooh dhoney laga Or rotey rotey bas ye kehney laga Mera yaar mujh ko chor gaya hai Mera pyaar muj s mooh mor gaya hai Ab main kis k liye khushboo mahkaoon? Mujh kon apne dil se lagey ga Mera chaman ojar gaya hai Mera yaar muj se bichar gaya hai Bas ab to her lamhey us ki yaad hai Bas beqarari hai, tarap hai faryad hai Mujh ko koi mere yaar se mila dey Mujh ko koi mera pyaar lota dey Wo ayey ga to khil jaoon ga maiN Apni zindegi se mil jaoon ha maiN

Waqai Lajawaab ! Iss Nazm Ka Reply kisi bhi words se adaa nahi kar sakta mein u dono k iski kya value hai meri nazar mein :)
Wah Wah Wah Kasam Se Zamanay Baad Koi Achi Nazam Parhnay Ko Mili Sevenstar bhai Sirf Aap Ki Badolat !
Mein Nehayat Sharminda Hoon K yeh Thread Meri Nazar Se Pehle Nahi Guzra Warna Aisa Ho nahi Sakta Itni Achi Nazm Parhne K Baad Mein Aik Muskurata Hua Reply nA kArta !
Hope Bara Bhai Samajh Kar Meri Laparwahii Ko Ignore kardia hoga aap ne !
Yeah m not udaas now at all zindagi is here wid me at the very moment ! n thanks everyone else for caring about me !Love U all Ppl :)
LoNEly ! SId !

[AQ]

Re: Gulab

Being Lonely (sid) bahi k naam jo kehte hain k GS main un ko yaad nahi kiya jaata.

kiouN bhai?
aap kaY threads sub saY ziadah sticky hotaY haiN masha Allah and aap ko tau officially recognise bhee kiyaa jaataa hai... aisee bhee kiyaa naraazgi?:)

[babri]

Re: Gulab

@being_lonely

Waqai Lajawaab ! Iss Nazm Ka Reply kisi bhi words se adaa nahi kar sakta mein u dono k iski kya value hai meri nazar mein :) Wah Wah Wah Kasam Se Zamanay Baad Koi Achi Nazam Parhnay Ko Mili Sevenstar bhai Sirf Aap Ki Badolat ! Mein Nehayat Sharminda Hoon K yeh Thread Meri Nazar Se Pehle Nahi Guzra Warna Aisa Ho nahi Sakta Itni Achi Nazm Parhne K Baad Mein Aik Muskurata Hua Reply nA kArta ! Hope Bara Bhai Samajh Kar Meri Laparwahii Ko Ignore kardia hoga aap ne ! Yeah m not udaas now at all zindagi is here wid me at the very moment ! n thanks everyone else for caring about me !Love U all Ppl :) LoNEly ! SId !

Chota bhai bhee kehte ho aur sharmanda bhee hote ho! bare bhai bano aur sharmanda maat ho bhai jaan.

you know zindegi main hum ko kuch aise log bvhee yaad karte hain jin ko hum yaad bhee nahi karte humare mind main bhee nahi hota k koi hum ko yaad kar raha hai.
well take care and be happy always.
Best of luck.

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: Gulab

you know zindegi main hum ko kuch aise log bvhee yaad karte hain jin ko hum yaad bhee nahi karte humare mind main bhee nahi hota k koi hum ko yaad kar raha hai.
well take care and be happy always.
Best of luck.
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its a very beautiful thing that u just said here :)

[babri]

Re: Gulab

you know zindegi main hum ko kuch aise log bvhee yaad karte hain jin ko hum yaad bhee nahi karte humare mind main bhee nahi hota k koi hum ko yaad kar raha hai. well take care and be happy always. Best of luck.

its a very beautiful thing that u just said here :)
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sis its true 101% right? kion k main bhee kabi kabi un logon ko yaad karta hoon jo mujh yaad bhe nahi karte hoon gey. even mujh achi tara jante bhee nahi hoon gey.

thanks.