GuL-e-Tasbeeh Jee Ki Farmaaish Pe

GHAZAL


**Ye kis tarha k mile khwaab mein ishaare mujhe
Wo kahin door bohat door se pukaare mujhe

****Tum is ko meri zaroorat kaho ya zid keh lo !
Bigarr gaya hoon koi aan k saNwaare mujhe
**
**Sajaa raha hoon zameeN ko main aasmaaN ki tarha
Hasad se dekh rahe hain sabhi sitaare mujhe
**
**Main kar chuka hoon mohabbat k naam se tauba
Mian mar chuka hoon koi daar se utaare mujhe !
**
Ye intazaar ka darya, wafaa ka shehr udhar
Bitthaa k bhool gaya hai koi kinaare mujhe


[RIGHT]written 19 July 2006[/RIGHT]

Re: GuL-e-Tasbeeh Jee Ki Farmaaish Pe

Zamil g kya baat hai bohat khooob
hasad sey dekh rahey hain sabhi sitarey mujhey

kamal ki saadgi hai aap k andaz-e-bayan mein dil ko choo gai aap ki ye ghazal.
Khuda karey zor-e-qalam or zayada

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Oh wow, mujhay nahi maloom tha itni jaldi bhi Farmaish poori ho jaaya karti hay:-) well half poori hui u didt wrote aaj ya kal this one is also old :D well thanks a lot Zamil, i like this line ''wuh kahin door buhat door sey pukarey mujhay''
Very nice thanks a lot for sharing:-)

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Bohat khoob Zamil, saari ghazal hi be’had umda hey :k: Thanx for sharing :slight_smile:

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Very nice :k:

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Jigar Zamil....Zindabaad !

Yaar Kis kis Sher Ki Tareef Karon.... Bari Murrass'aa Ghazal...Aafreen.

Kitni Sunder....Komal....Sheetal Ghazal Hai...Mubarak Ho.

Darwesh.

Re: GuL-e-Tasbeeh Jee Ki Farmaaish Pe

Beautiful :)

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Bohat shukria Rani jee,
Barri nawazish. :)

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Zabardast+Zalim =ZZ

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Farmaaish mein khuloos ho to jald bhi poori ho jaati hai :)
Pazeeraai k liye bohat bohat shukria...

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Barri Nawazish,
Thanx alottt for appreciating… :slight_smile:

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Thank You :slight_smile:

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Sundar :eek: ** Kolmal** :eek: Sheetal :eek:
Acha…ap kehte hain to maan lete hain :slight_smile:
Bohat shukria
Hamesha khush rahiye.

Re: GuL-e-Tasbeeh Jee Ki Farmaaish Pe

bohat hooob

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Thank You :)

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Shukria :)
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*Agar bura na maanein to ek baat kahoon, apni zahaanat ko forums pe zaaya karne k bajaaye kuch constructive output dijiye, i m sure k aap bohat taraqqi karein gi. Zahir kai k main apki zindagi k baare mein kuch nahi janta, ho sakta hai k aap already hi bohat taraqqi kar chuki hon. Lekin bas dil chaha ye kehne ka, hope u'll not mind. :) *

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Bohat Shukria... :)

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Ap ky khulus ny tu rula diya qasam sy{ab ap ka khitab Zalim nahi Mukhlis hy} aj ky door main itna khulos.Subhan Allah.Don’t worry its due to my summer vacations.Gup shup ny kuch ziada time ly liya warna woh shyr mery hi bary main hy,"Niyaty shoq ubhar na jay khin.Wasy Sanjidgi sy kh rhi hon construction ka kam itny logon ny sanbhala hoa hy k meri zaroorat nahi hy.wasy bhi Amal krti hon Iqbal ky is shyr pr ky
***Mujhy fikry jhan kion ho! ***
Jahan ateyra hy ya mera
Dua meri bhi hy ab ky Allah mujhy tameeri kam krny ki tofiq ata frmay maeen sum ameen.
Thanks 4 ur input.