^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Just made it for heck of it so thought I should share it here too

For verily upon me is the sky
Asking me whether I have any questions
I said that, seems like I am about to die
Do you have any good suggestions?
I was told that there’s nothing to worry
For verily I shall be provided
It was not the sky but rather me
I kept walking in dark and was never guided
Now all I have is this heart
That yearns to talk to sky again
May the heart always see the light
May the guidance from above never end.

© HHL: 11:25pm

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

:D
very nice nemo keep it up

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

Tum mera peecha karte yahaN tak bhi aa gayi :hoonh:

Everyone, welcome Sabriya to poetry along with myself :hoonh:

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

Bas merrii marzi… and I’ve posted here once or twice anywayzzzzzzzz

But thanks for the welcome anyway :blush:

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

Hey hey hold that thought, I have yet to be welcomed too :blush:

PS - I posted here like 2-3 times too (2-3 = 2-3 threads) :cb:

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

sir ji ye kya likh dia, ye to koi AQ ki punjabi ghazal hai jo aap nay english mai thok daali.

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

No i posted my work two to three times :snooty:

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

Abey nahi yaar, I don’t steal work like that (the very reason why I don’t post my work here with same fear). Sabriya was responsible for making me compose the few lines which i posted above. :cb:

Oh My Gold! (exquisite Gold jewelry pics)
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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

Sir jee, bara meharbaani dont blame this on me.

Haan koi love shove wali poem hoti, then sari fault meri hai :blush: :smiley: :wink:

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Re: ^^^ Guidance from Above ^^^

excellent an so spontaneous free verse, Nemo.
mashallah. keep the nice poems coming.

best,
Dushwari