Guest of the Week - ajazali

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kisi had tak main main sufi poetry ky kuch ko nahi manta
jaisay k nazyia e wahdat ul wajood
Allama Iqbaal nai bhi es nazrya ko zehr e qatil kaha tha.

Ishaq e haqiqi aur Ishq e majazi ki bat karen to kuch sufi shayri aisi hai bohat deep, aestheticlly apealing to hai lekn oos se Ishaq e Haqiqi nahi chalakta

for example sassi kehti hai

Maa’n malamat kar na mainu
te main kaich walon nai murrna

another example from ishaq ankhorri perr ay,

birhu bakheera sakht awarra
khaish qabeela laaib jehrra
me ku maran **maa pyo veer **ay
Ishaq ankhorri peerr ay

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translate these lines and explain whats wrong with these lines

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ghalat nai kaha,
Sassi apni maan se kehti ha ka "tu mujhe bura bhala na keh, ma punu k shehr kaich zaroor jaon gi "
mai esy ishaq haqiqi samjhnay se qaasir hun.

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Shah lateef portrayed Sassi very well. He compared Sassi's journey in search of Punnhoo as human search for the lord.

I think the above shair (posted by you) also belong to that category.

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dont you think that its injustice for women to take her 'banda' and take man as 'malik'

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Bano Qudsia kehti hai ke aurat to hoti hi 'Talib e Duniya' hai aur jab wo ek shakhs ko dil main basa le to doosre ko jaga dene ke liye ussi shakhs ko mukhtalif roop deti rehti hai... tabhi hamare muashre main pati parmeshwar jaisi terms pai jati hain.

lekin ek baat hai yehi aurat jab aarif e duniya se saalik e khuda banti hai to phir wo commitment main mardon se aage nahi to peeche bhi nahin rehti

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http://mohsinnazir.files.wordpress.com/2009/12/mohsin2ou.jpg

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Ayat-e-mohbt ki tilawat nahi karty
lagta hai yahan log mohbAt nahi karty

Anjaam-e-wafa soch k aghaz kro tm
chupky sy niklny ki hamaqat nahi karty

ye qaid sikha dyti ha adaab-e-mohbt
pinjry mn parindy bi sharart nahi karty

wo kon hain ks wasty es dr py pary han
deewany kbi dasht sy hijrat nahi karty

mit jaty han duniya sy wo log bi SAAGHAR
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:lajawab: sharing :k:

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partition ke baad ke konse Indian Urdu sho'ara ne aap ko mutasir kia?

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new Indian poets ko kam hi janta hun,

Bahir badar acha likhtay hain

Javaid akkhtar nai jo Pankaj udhas k duar main likha wo bohat hi ala tha :k:

**waqt se waqt ki kia shakayat karen waqt hi na raha waqt ki bat hai
oos nai dekha mujhe oos ne chaha mujhe aur thukra dia waqt ki bat hai
**
sahir ludhaynvi bhi bohat hi ala likhtay thy

chalo ik baar phir se ajnabi ban jaye hum dono…

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Chalo ek baar phir se ajnabi ban jaayein hum dono

Na mein tum se koi umeed rakhoon dil nawaazi ki
Na tum meri taraf dekho ghalat andaaz nazron se

Na merey dil ki dharhkan larhkharhaaye meri baaton mein
Na zaahir ho tumhari kash makash ka raaz nazron se

Taaruf rog ho jaye to us ko bhulana behter
Taaluq bojh ban jaye to us ko torhna acha

Wo afsaana jisey takmeel tak lana na ho mumkin
Usey ek khoob soorat morh de kar chorhna acha

Tumhain bhi koi uljhan rokti hai pesh qadmi se
Mujhey bhi log kehtey hain ke ye jalwey paraaye hain

Merey hamraah bhi ruswaaiyaan hain merey maazi ki
Tumhaarey saath bhi guzri hoyi raaton ke saaye hain

Chalo ek baar phir se ajnabi ban jaayein hum dono

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wow nice choice.

aap ko Ghazal ziada pasand hain ya nazm?

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nazam sirf Hamd aur Na'at hi pasand ha :D

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you mean you even don't lik Amjad Islam Amjad's Nazmen

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mera khyal ha amjad islam amjad ki nazmon se apki murad azad shayri/prose ha??

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Is Mai Kiya burai hai :hmmm:

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Bohot khoob.

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burai to main pehli line mai hi keh dia k nahi ha. Sassi baligh thi aur apni marzi krny ka haq rakhti thi :smiley: mai to esy paiker ki mohabt ya ishq majazi manta hun.
But the proponents of sufism say it is ishq e haqiqi. How can u justify that this share reflects ishq e haqiqi?