- gone -

AQ · November 14, 2003, 4:12pm

Meri khokhli haNsee maiN jo dard hay
woh beetay maazi kaa ik warq hay

Sehar · November 14, 2003, 4:47pm

hmm

Nice :k:

WiseGuy · November 14, 2003, 5:18pm

Nice :k:

Kabhi maazi kay dard say bhi bahar aaeay
Mustaqbil ki fikr kernay main, kia koi harj hay?

AQ · November 14, 2003, 5:58pm

woh walaa sher fil badeeh thaa abhi poori ghazal likhni hai soch soch kay

sehar:eek: thankooo yaani kay

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 14, 2003, 10:55pm

beautiful:k:

WiseGuy · November 15, 2003, 4:04pm

Ho gayee complete aap gee ghazal.

Capricorn · November 15, 2003, 8:12pm

Nice starter Anwaar :k:

cuteepie · November 16, 2003, 1:27am

very nice :k:

Azad · November 16, 2003, 9:04pm

Maza nahi aya

Philanthrope · November 17, 2003, 1:21am

Re: - gone -

Oh Beautiful.. :k:

Dilsay · November 20, 2003, 4:25pm

Wah kiya baat hai

system · November 20, 2003, 6:29pm

ohh, very nice… :k::k:

Sandleen · November 28, 2003, 7:39am

same here

mein bhi bhoot dukhi larki hon