go laakh baarishaiN huwi yadoon k sehaN maiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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*** do diN jo meri zindghi se dosti rehi har lahza moat be tu mujhay doondhti rahi

go laakh baarishaiN huwi yadoon k sehaN maiN
maazi ki gard haal k ruurkh per jami rehi

chamka wo meri aankh ki chilmaN maiN aik pal
aik baraq thei k shaam-o-sehar koondti rehi

bichra tu mujhay payar ka ahsaas day gay’aa
jab taak qareeb tha tu faqat dil -lagi rehi

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Boht khoob..:k:

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nice

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buhet khoob :k:

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verry Nice koyal :k:

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Re: go laakh baarishaiN huwi yadoon k sehaN maiN

veryyy nice :k:

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bichra tu mujhay payar ka ahsaas day gay’aa
jab taak qareeb tha tu faqat dil -lagi rehi

very nice… :k:

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khoob

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very beautiful indeed :flower1:

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go laakh baarishaiN huwi yadoon k sehaN maiN
maazi ki gard haal k ruurkh per jami rehi

Very nice :k:

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Re: go laakh baarishaiN huwi yadoon k sehaN maiN

:bummer:

very nice :k:

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nice

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:eek: :ahaa: shooked

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thanks heartu…:slight_smile:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
nice
[/QUOTE]

hnmmmm acha

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hmmm well said :k:

kaisi ho koyal bibi :slight_smile:

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did u tell him/her all of this?

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tum is sec se dafa kio nahi ho jatii :smack:

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bichra tu mujhay payar ka ahsaas day gay'aa
jab taak qareeb tha tu faqat dil -lagi rehi

bahot hii pyara sher hai ** Koyal **.
Thanks for sharing it here.

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thanks…su su raj me theek and ap?