..........Gilay un se hotay hain jo dil ke pas hotay hain.........

muskurah · January 16, 2011, 8:37am

usay kehna gilay unhi se hoty hain jo dil kay pas hotay hain shikayat un se hoti hai jo behad khas hotay hain,
mera tujh se gila karna tumhen yunhi rula dena khafa karna teri taqeed kay badle jafa karna mohabbat ki alamat hai, ye ulfat ki alamat hai mohabbat me kabhi hargiz isay dil par nahi lena usay kehna mohabbat ki tawaqo un se hoti hai, keh jin ki aas hoti hai gilay un se hotay hain jo dil ke pas hotay hain…

Southie · January 16, 2011, 8:52am

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Very nice.

If possible, could you share the meaning of the words:
taqeed, jafa, alamat (= nishaani?), ulfat, tawaqo

Amal · January 16, 2011, 2:39pm

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muskurah:

usay kehna gilay unhi se hoty hain jo dil kay pas hotay hain shikayat un se hoti hai jo behad khas hotay hain, mera tujh se gila karna tumhen yunhi rula dena khafa karna teri taqeed kay badle jafa karna mohabbat ki alamat hai, ye ulfat ki alamat hai mohabbat me kabhi hargiz isay dil par nahi lena usay kehna mohabbat ki tawaqo un se hoti hai, keh jin ki aas hoti hai gilay un se hotay hain jo dil ke pas hotay hain..........:)

Nazm to achi hey muskurah, lekin shaed pasting kartey huwey merge ho gai hey. proper line breaks hotieN to aur acha lagta. Anyway, welcome to the Poetry section and thanx for sharing it with us :)

Amal · January 16, 2011, 2:44pm

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taqeed= directive, emphasis
jafa= disloyal, to cheat
alamat= indication, nishaani is fine too :)

Shazia_Arif · January 16, 2011, 2:47pm

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nice sharing.

Southie · January 16, 2011, 6:26pm

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Shukriya!

UZ · January 18, 2011, 7:15am

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I was thinking the same thing sayma if its possible for you can you break it and write it like a proper ghazal if its possible for you:)

Munir · January 18, 2011, 11:29am

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very nice

deadsoul · January 18, 2011, 2:42pm

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nice one

muskurah · January 21, 2011, 10:32am

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thanx...sorry i don't know how to break it up if u can i shall be thankful...

Amal · January 21, 2011, 1:27pm

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Poetry is never in one line muskurah. Where did you copy it from? It must have been in proper format there. Each line should have one verse. That's it :)

muskurah · January 24, 2011, 10:55am

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thank you 4 ur help will try 2 maintain proper for next time...:-))