Gila kum â€“gooi ka mujh sey baja hai lakin..

system · February 13, 2003, 7:26pm

Gila kum –gooi ka mujh sey baja hai lakin
ay Jaan-e-sukhan
tu ney kabhi soocha
kay teri simt
jub mae aankh bhur kay daikhti hoon tu
meri sunehri jild kay neechay
achanuk
itney dhairooN nunhey nunhey sey diyee kiyon julney lagtey hain…

Azad · February 13, 2003, 7:31pm

Beautiful
:k: :k:
bhai sudaii nazar na lag jay kahain

chand_chehra · February 13, 2003, 7:36pm

:k:

system · February 13, 2003, 7:39pm

thanx,

nahi lagti, aap fiker na kerian..

Thanx CC

Azad · February 13, 2003, 7:43pm

ha jaisay aap ki fikar main 10 kg wazan kam ho jay ga

system · February 13, 2003, 7:50pm

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*Originally posted by Azad: *

ha jaisay aap ki fikar main 10 kg wazan kam ho jay ga
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acha, ager nahi hoga tu kertay raheyeye meri fiker.. ;)

Bhooli_Bisri · February 13, 2003, 7:59pm

dil ko cho lene wali kavish

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 13, 2003, 8:09pm

:k: nice one vivaeeyee

Azad · February 13, 2003, 8:15pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ** Vivacious ***: *

acha, ager nahi hoga tu kertay raheyeye meri fiker.. ;)
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humari bala say ... dunia main our koi nahi raha jo hum Sudaii ki fikar kartay phirain

nikii · February 13, 2003, 11:21pm

nice :)

ameen · February 14, 2003, 6:49am

very nice…:k:

Dragon_King · February 14, 2003, 7:47am

buhat khoob :k:

Dilsay · February 14, 2003, 7:50am

Very nice and thanks for sharing....

Philanthrope · February 14, 2003, 9:08am

Re: Gila kum –gooi ka mujh sey baja hai lakin..

Lovely yaar …really superb :k:
I really like ur contributed poetry :k:
Thanks for sharing

SunnyBoy · February 14, 2003, 10:04am

buhat khoob :k:

Man_de_Mouj · February 14, 2003, 10:22pm

Re: Gila kum –gooi ka mujh sey baja hai lakin..

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ** Vivacious ***: *

X c lent
take this one from my side

Hamary darmiyaan aysa kooie rishtaa naheen tha
tairy shaanaay pay koie chaat na thi
meray zimmay koie aangan naheen tha
koie wada tairee zanjeer-e-pa bannanay naheen paya
keesi iqraar nay meri qallie ko naheen thama
hawa-e-dasht ki maanind tu aazad tha
rastaay teri marzi kay taabaay thay
mujhay bhi apni tanhaie pay
daikha jaaie tow puura tassaruf tha
laikin aaj
jab tu nay raasta badla
tow kuch aisa laga mujh ko
keh jaisay tu nay mujh sey baywafaie ki

Man_de_Mouj · February 15, 2003, 6:04pm

Re: Gila kum –gooi ka mujh sey baja hai lakin..

Wah...zabardast Choice...kia baat hay Parveen Shakir ke

Let me contribute to all a grand grand shaar of her....(May Allah rest her soul in eternal peace (Aameen)).

woh jis ghoumaand say bicchra gilaa tou es ka hay - keh saari baat mohabbat main rakh rakhaao ki thee.

Azad · February 16, 2003, 6:19am

aik bar phir ...
bohut khoob ... thanks for sharing

system · February 16, 2003, 7:11pm

^ thanx alot guppies

Man de Mouj, aap ka intikhaab bohat acha hai..