Ghum Ko orrh Layta Hon.............

Ghum ko orrh layta hon

Zehan say, Takhai’ul say
Zehar teri mohabbat ka
Apnay dil k daman say
khoon teri hasrat ka
jab nichoor layta hon
Ghum ko orrh layta hon

Koi chekhta hai jab
wasl kay andheron mein
Koi Dobtaa hai jab
Dhal chukay saveron mein
Khud ko toor layta hon
ghum ko orrh layta hon

Kirchiyan jo bikhre hain
mehar ki, wafaaoon ki
phut chuke jo tasverain
tujh say Bay-nawaoon ki
Un ko joor Layta hon
Ghum ko orrh Layta hon

Dabey paaoN yuNhi jab
Shaam ghum ki dhul jaiy
rah chaltay chaltay jab
Bay-wafa woh mil jaiy
Mou ko moor layta hon
ghum ko orrh layta hon

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Really Very Awesome.. Aap To Buhat Chhupi Rustam Nikleen.. :)

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:blush: …app logon k sath rahnay ka asar hai!

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Mera bhi kuch yehi khayal hey :)

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Bohat umda nazm hey, a lot to read in it :k: Thanx for sharing it with us soniaa_jee :slight_smile:

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wel app log mujhay Sharminda kar rahay hain…:blush:

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Wah , its just amazing, aap tou buhat kamal ka likhti heiN, zabardast nazm hey, i liked it so much, thanks alot for sharing this beauty:~) hope to c more :)

Re: Ghum Ko orrh Layta Hon.............

rah chaltay chaltay jab
Bay-wafa woh mil jaiy
Mou ko moor layta hon
ghum ko orrh layta hon

nice :)

Re: Ghum Ko orrh Layta Hon.............

buhat he zabardast
sonia jeee ap to chaaa gayeeeeeeeeee
kaha chupa k rakhi thi yeh shayera app nay ab tak
buhat time laga dya ap nay
but derr ayay durust ayay
buhat he alaa hai
khoobsorat alfaaz aur phir unka sahi istimaal
wahhhhhhhhhhhhh

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All i can is"thank u"
Bohat Shukriya Maree Poem Pasand karnay ka
:)

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**jaesi mishri muun mei haule haule pighalti hae, waese hi isse parh kar meethi meethi si khalish dil mei aayee. Bahot pyaar se likhi aap ne sonia- bahot maza aya parh ke. **

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jaan ker acha laga kay aap ko pasnad aai ............thanks alot :)

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Koi chekhta hai jab
wasl kay andheron mein
Koi Dobtaa hai jab
Dhal chukay saveron mein
Khud ko toor layta hon
ghum ko orrh layta hon
Khub:k:

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very well done SJ

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Dabey paaoN yuNhi jab
Shaam ghum ki dhul jaiy
rah chaltay chaltay jab
Bay-wafa woh mil jaiy
Mou ko moor layta hon
ghum ko orrh layta hon

Wah ji, Sonia kya baat hay
thanks for sharing .....

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Thanks for Reading Arsalanh jee:)

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ahan
:hugz:

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Koi chekhta hai jab
wasl kay andheron mein
Koi Dobtaa hai jab
Dhal chukay saveron mein
Khud ko toor layta hon
ghum ko orrh layta hon

Kool Yaar :k:
Love this part

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Koi chekhta hai jab
wasl kay andheron mein
Koi Dobtaa hai jab
Dhal chukay saveron mein
Khud ko toor layta hon
ghum ko orrh layta hon

This is outstanding Sonia

Sub theek keh rahay hein aap waki Chupi RUSTAM bulkay RUSTAM ZAMAN nikli ho

Kon Hay WOH :aq:

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:aq:
hain??
aur agar koi hai bhi tou nahin bataon ge app ko:naraz: