ghum ke barish na bhi teray ghum ko dohia nahi

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 5, 2003, 10:12pm

ghum ke barish ne bhi teray naqsh ko dohia nahi
to ne mujh ko koh diya, mein ne tujhe kohia nahi
neend ka halqa golabee se komaar aankhon mein tha
youhn laga jese woh sham ko deer tak soaa nahi
har traf dewar-o-dar aur in mein aankhon ke hajoom
keh sakay jo dil ke halat woh lab goya nahi
jurm aadm ne kia aur nasl adm ko saza
kat-ta hoon zindagee bahr mein ne jo boia nahi
janta hoon aik aise shakss ko mein bhi Muneer
ghum se pathar ho gaya lekin roaa nahi

_Nazish · March 5, 2003, 10:28pm

janta hoon aik aise shakss ko mein bhi *Muneer
ghum se pathar ho gaya lekin roaa nahi*

Beautiful.

WiseGuy · March 6, 2003, 12:43am

GHam kee barish nay bhi teray naqsh ko dhoya nahee
Tu nay mujh ko kho diya, maiN nay tujhay khoya nahee

Bohat khoob ghazal kisi ke
Thanks for sharing :)

chand_chehra · March 6, 2003, 3:05am

:k:

Dilsay · March 6, 2003, 9:38am

Beautiful and thanks for sharing......

Amal · March 6, 2003, 1:38pm

Lovely:k:

Bhooli_Bisri · March 6, 2003, 1:50pm

lajvab

ullujii · March 6, 2003, 1:52pm

bhoot khoob :)

guybrush · March 6, 2003, 5:06pm

nice :k:

udaasaankhein · March 6, 2003, 5:48pm

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 7, 2003, 12:47am

~Nazish~ thanks

Wiseguy thanks and u welcome:)

chand_chehra thanks

Dilsay thanks and u welcome:)

Amal thanks

Bohli Bisri thanks

ullujii thanks

guybrush thanks

udassaankhein thanks