Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq, rahoon be-qarar kab tak
merey dil bata yeh mujhko, karoon ussko pyar kab tak

yeh hujoom-e-na-muradi ghum-e-be-shumar kab tak
terii baat kaa bharosaa teraa intezaar kab tak

shab-e-hijr ki udasi kahin mujhko lay na doobey
meri dharkano pe hoga tera ikhteyar kab tak

na hi aaj ka bharosa na hi kal ki hain umeedein
teri raah guzar takun mein shab-e-wasl-yaar kab tak

mein nikal pari thi tanha liyey saraey ranj dil par
magar phir khayal aya keh sahoon yeh baar kab tak

merii aankhein takrahi hein teri wapsi ki raahein
tu hi ab bata dey mujhko karoon intezar kab tak

mujhay yoon tou dey geya hay wuh dilasa jatey jatey
magar ab yeh sochti hoon karoon eaitbaar kab tak

buhat ilteja ki uss ney keh (~) na jao
magar uss ki be-dili ka bhala sehtii waar kab tak

Poet Unknown:~)

[Amal]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq…!

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq, rahoon be-qarar kab tak
merey dil bata yeh mujhko, karoon ussko pyar kab tak

yeh hujoom-e-na-muradi ghum-e-be-shumar kab tak
terii baat kaa bharosaa teraa intezaar kab tak

shab-e-hijr ki udasi kahin mujhko lay na doobey
meri dharkano pe hoga tera ikhteyar kab tak

na hi aaj ka bharosa na hi kal ki hain umeedein
teri raah guzar takun mein shab-e-wasl-yaar kab tak

mein nikal pari thi tanha liyey saraey ranj dil par
magar phir khayal aya keh sahoon yeh baar kab tak

merii aankhein takrahi hein teri wapsi ki raahein
tu hi ab bata dey mujhko karoon intezar kab tak

mujhay yoon tou dey geya hay wuh dilasa jatey jatey
magar ab yeh sochti hoon karoon eaitbaar kab tak

buhat ilteja ki uss ney keh (~) na jao
magar uss ki be-dili ka bhala sehtii waar kab tak

Poet Unknown:~)

Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey Gul :k: Is ke 2 aashaar aap ney Bait Bazi meiN bhi use keeye the. Amazing stuff :k: Thanx for sharing.

[Bholay_Bisray]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq…!

Beautifully written!

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haadase aaye.nge jiivan me.n to tum hoke niDhaal
kisii diivaar ko thaamoge to yaad aa_uu.Ngaa
is me.n shaamil hai merii baKht kii taariikii bhii
tum siyaah rang jo pahanoge to yaad aa_uu.Ngaa

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[NikamiJano]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

v nice Gul-e-tea..:)

[Berhi_Bee]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

bohett khoub :)

[Sannan]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq, rahoon be-qarar kab tak
merey dil bata yeh mujhko, karoon ussko pyar kab tak

**
Lagta Hay Yeh She'r meray ooper kah diya Shae'r sb. nay ..... anyway GUl G buhat khubsurat diloon ko moom kar dainay wali ....... **

[mahamkhan]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

beautiful sharing....thnx!

[sad_affect]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

Zabardast gr8 stuff

[Prince_Ali]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq…!

very nice :k:

[alirafaqat]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

Khoobsurat shairing Gul ...

[Zamil]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq…!

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq, rahoon be-qarar kab tak
merey dil bata yeh mujhko, karoon ussko pyar kab tak

yeh hujoom-e-na-muradi ghum-e-be-shumar kab tak
terii baat kaa bharosaa teraa intezaar kab tak

shab-e-hijr ki udasi kahin mujhko lay na doobey
meri dharkano pe hoga tera ikhteyar kab tak

na hi aaj ka bharosa na hi kal ki hain umeedein
teri raah guzar takun mein shab-e-wasl-yaar kab tak

mujhay yoon tou dey geya hay wuh dilasa jatey jatey
magar ab yeh sochti hoon karoon eaitbaar kab tak

**Zabardast sharing… **

[goodnews]

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@Sannan

Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq, rahoon be-qarar kab tak
merey dil bata yeh mujhko, karoon ussko pyar kab tak

**Lagta Hay Yeh She’r meray ooper kah diya Shae’r sb. nay … anyway GUl G buhat khubsurat diloon ko moom kar dainay wali … **

Tum ny bhi piyar kia hy Sanny
**Q:**karoon ussko pyar kab tak
**A: **Jab tak dono ki shadi nahi ho jati. ( or “ein khiyal ast o muhal asat” I think)

[Muslim_girl_1]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

very nice..............................................

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq…!

bohut khoob :k:

[Sannan]

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@goodnews

Tum ny bhi piyar kia hy Sanny
**Q:**karoon ussko pyar kab tak
**A: **Jab tak dono ki shadi nahi ho jati. ( or “ein khiyal ast o muhal asat” I think)

**Main Nay Pyar …Araz Kia Hay **
**Woh Meri Pahli Muhabat Woh Meri Pahli Shikasat **
**Phir To Paiman-e-wafa So (100) martaba main nay kia **

[goodnews]

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@Sannan

*Main Nay Pyar ....Araz Kia Hay * *Woh Meri Pahli Muhabat Woh Meri Pahli Shikasat * *Phir To Paiman-e-wafa So (100) martaba main nay kia :D *

:D Umeed hy no soo(900) martba krny ky bad haj(biah)kr hi logy.:D

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

Thanks guys for liking this piece, credit goes to Poet,

Sannan yeh kisi sahab nay nahi likhi balkey its was by written any Girl:p

[reet]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

**merii aankhein takrahi hein teri wapsi ki raahein
tu hi ab bata dey mujhko karoon intezar kab tak

mujhay yoon tou dey geya hay wuh dilasa jatey jatey
magar ab yeh sochti hoon karoon eaitbaar kab tak**

thnx for this nice sharing.......!

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq…!

poet ka name mea bata doun plssss
:k: me ne perhe the jeb yu send

[EEMAAN]

Re: Ghum-e-hijr-e-yaar kab taq......!

very nice sharing,,