Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ayo aye sanam aisi mohabbat karain
mar bhi jayain hum to zinda rahain

phool kehtay hain tumhay has kar jiyo
khushboyoon ko lotatay raho
tum bulbulo ki tarah aye sanam
pyaar ke geet gatay raho!

aye yaar zindagi hai wahi zindagi
jo mohabbat mai hi dobi rahi
hona payaingay juda hum aye sanam
ayo hum aaj aisay milain!

rashk karta rahay aasmaan
naaz tum per karay do jahan
daastane hamari aye sanam
mehfilon mai hamesha gonjti rahain!

ayo aye sanam aisi mohabbat karain
mar bhi jayain hum to zinda rahain

i wrote this myself!

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

OOOOOh
I have no words to praise your
such dedicated Poetry

By the way dedicated to.......

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

Aisha> Wow! Ur getting better and better at this shairi of yours - u keep it up gal! Love it....

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

alata ji did u like it? its to all my friends! and mw thanks!

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

Hmmmm Aisha good work,

tumnay to itni likh bhi li hum to ye bhi nahi likh patay…

Keep it up :thumb:

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

thanks nomi bhai:blush:

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

Very nice indeed :k: keep it up :~)

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

thanks amal:blush:

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

very nice...

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

umm thank u!:blush: hope who it is for like it:jano:

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

very nice poen Aisha!.........................:)

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Re: Ghazel Dedicated to my friends especially khanbabax and a bird

thanks sonia jee:blush: