~ GhazaL ~

[aabla_pa]

seenay me.n “un” k jalvay chhupaaye huay to hai.n
hum apnay dil ko “tuur” banaaye huay to hai.n

taasiir-e-jazb-e-shauq dikhaaye huay to hai.n
hum tera har hijaab uThaaye huay to hai.n

tere gunah-gaar gunah_gaar hi sahi
tere karam ki aas lagaaye huay to hai.n

ye tujko iKhtiyaar hai taasiir day na day
dast-e-dua hum aaj uThaaye huay to hai.n

miT’tay huo.n ko dekh k kyon ro na dein ‘Majaz’
aaKhir kisi k hum bhi miTaaye huay to hai.n

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: ~ GhazaL ~

ye tujko iKhtiyaar hai taasiir day na day
dast-e-dua hum aaj uThaaye huay to hai.n

*achi ghazal hei aur ye meri fave line.
p.s signature change huh?! I liked the old one better :)
*

[padfoot]

Re: ~ GhazaL ~

Nice :k:

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: ~ GhazaL ~

nice :k:

[Koyal]

Re: ~ GhazaL ~

:k:

[Dushwari]

Re: ~ GhazaL ~

very nice gazal, aabla_pa.
thanks for sharing.
best,
Dushwari

[aabla_pa]

Re: ~ GhazaL ~

bhot bhot mehrbani sab ehbaab ki :)

[bheegiyaad]

Re: ~ GhazaL ~

nice :k: