ghazal

Nabi na thay maghar insaan pay jaan charuktay thay
sunna hai aglay zamanay kay loog achay thay

unoh nay mujh say kaha tha kasey say lo na laga
ujur kay scooh raha hoon wo loog achay thay

to b continued…

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Start tou acha hai…:halo:
Next epi kab aaye gi???

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good one…:k:

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Barri sacchi baateiN heiN aniha :k: Waiting for the rest…

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nice one
but why 2 b conti.
kiaa next abhi tak likha nahi

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:biggthumb

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continued

Woh lafz bhool gaye jinn kay aino mein kabhi
tere badan kay khud o khal tuk uttar tay thay
woh sehar toot gaya jis kay asray pay kabhi
hum aasman ko bhi kabhi teri galli samjhtay thay

to be continued

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yeh to be continued ka kia chaker hey

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Woh baasteiyan bhi ajab theen woh hasteeyan bhi ajab
kay andhioon mein bhi jin kay chirag jaltay thay
woh daur beet gaya jub tere baghair hamein
tamam shahar kay rastay udaas lagtay thay
woh annkh buj gayee jis kee kiran kiran kay liye
kabhi kabhi tere honth bhi tarstay thay
tu kal idhar say joh guzraa toh ahle shehar kay saath
bura na maan kay hum khud bhi tujh pay hanstay thay

Complete

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i have heard of this b4 too its nice :) one thanks for sharing

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thank u