Ser e sehra mussafir ko sitara yaad rehta hai
Main chalta hoon mujhe chehra tumhara yaad rehta hai
Tumhara zurf hai tum ko muhabbat bhool jatii hai
Hamein tu jis ne hans ker bi pukara yaad rehta hai
Muhabbat aur nafrat , talhii aue shernii
Kis ne kis tara ka phool maara yaad rehta hai
Muhabbat mein ju dooba ho iisey saahil se kya lena
Kisey iis beher mein ja kar kanara yaad rehta hai
Bohat lehron ko pakra doobney waley ke haathon ne
Yehi bas aake darya ka nazara yaad rehta hai
Sadayein aake sii, yaksaniyat mein doob jati hain
Zara sa mukhtalif jis ne pukara yaad rehta hai
By: Adeem Hashmi
Sannan
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Re: Ghazal!
*cute choice as usual ...keep it up *
Re: Ghazal!
Very nice Maham, thanks for sharing:-)
Re: Ghazal!
Thanx a lot....Sannan, Gul & Ehsass...for liking my intikhaab...
Zamil
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Re: Ghazal!
Wah wa wah wa… 
Hamesha ki tarha eik bohat hi achi ghazal… :k:
Kya baat hai jee 
Is misre mein kuch gaRbaR hai, check it again if u’ve quoted it from his book;
Muhabbat aur nafrat , talhkii aur shernii
muddii
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Re: Ghazal!
Sadayein aake sii, yaksaniyat mein doob jati hain
Zara sa mukhtalif jis ne pukara yaad rehta hai
Buhat Khub nice choice n nice taste:)
Re: Ghazal!
hi Mahamkhan.
thanks for sharing!
esp this 2-liner
Bohat lehron ko pakra doobney waley ke haathon ne
Yehi bas aake darya ka nazara yaad rehta hai
best,
dushi
Re: Ghazal!
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Pasand karney ka buhat shukriya…maine yeh ghazal magazine main parhii thi aur abb nahi pata iis line mein kya correction karnii hai…
Re: Ghazal!
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Sadayein aake sii, yaksaniyat mein doob jati hain
Zara sa mukhtalif jis ne pukara yaad rehta hai
Buhat Khub nice choice n nice taste:)
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Re: Ghazal!
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Zabardast...
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hi Mahamkhan.
thanks for sharing!
esp this 2-liner
Bohat lehron ko pakra doobney waley ke haathon ne
Yehi bas aake darya ka nazara yaad rehta hai
best,
dushi
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Thnx to both of u for liking....!
Re: Ghazal!
Ser e sehra mussafir ko sitara yaad rehta hai
Main chalta hoon mujhe chehra tumhara yaad rehta hai
Tumhara zurf hai tum ko muhabbat bhool jatii hai
Hamein tu jis ne hans ker bi pukara yaad rehta hai
Awesome, ( Thanks for Sharing )
Re: Ghazal!
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Ser e sehra mussafir ko sitara yaad rehta hai
Main chalta hoon mujhe chehra tumhara yaad rehta hai
Tumhara zurf hai tum ko muhabbat bhool jatii hai
Hamein tu jis ne hans ker bi pukara yaad rehta hai
Awesome, ( Thanks for Sharing )
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Thanks a lot Saud Musheer gee
Re: Ghazal!
Sadayein aake sii, yaksaniyat mein doob jati hain
Zara sa mukhtalif jis ne pukara yaad rehta hai
Bohat he aala............................:)