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Ankhoon main chupaye Bethi hoon
Aik Dariya
Behtay Zakhmoon ka
Uss waqt zara tum chup rehna
Uss waqt na mujh sey Kuch kehna
Uss waqt Na kuch Ghum khwari hoo
Bardasht na hoga Jab mujh sey
Tu phir
Main Sach much Rodongi!!!**
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:k:
Very nice...
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yaar its a NAZAM
ghalati say ghazal likh dia ab edit hi nahin horaha subject the Topic is
Zabt-e-Girya!!!
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Nahee nahee nahee dekho rona mat plzzzzzzzzzzzz 
Waisay Khuda na karain ke tumhein kabhi aansoo bahaana parain .. Ameen
Nazm is no doubt, wonderful :k:
Re: Re: Zabt-e-Girya!!
Well Im not crying! ye tu nazam hai
ap kyon pareshaan hogaye…?
aur roye meray dushman 
Dont worry aisa waqt nahi ayega inshallah…
thanks any ways!!!
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lamhay appiii its beautiful:k: keep it up:hug:
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very nice Mumtaaz jee:p
wait till kaali jumay-raat when mod will make an entry to correct it (hopefully before this thread gets burried)
…
har forum maiN abb king aur queen haiN… kuch forum kee queens aur kings darbaar maiN aanaa apni shaan maiN gustaakhi samajhtay haiN 
nice :k:
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lolzz
wait till Amavas ki raat …
Queen sahiba janay kab tashreef laiengi
Shabbo tum buladoo na unkooo…
humm
nice:k:
:lahol:
thanks…
Bardasht na hoga Jab mujh sey
Tu phir
Main Sach much Rodongi!!!
umda :k:
Re: Zabt-e-Girya!!
very well written Lamhay :k:
reminds me of the poem Un Jheel si gehri aakhoon mein ik shaam kabhi abad tu ho by Amjad Islam Amjad.
I dont know why but eska rythem uss terh ka hay. I like it. keep it up
Thanks Suraj ji !
Re: Re: Zabt-e-Girya!!
Thanks Chodhry ji
acha …ap ko aisa laga