Ghazal: "....Tera Shaa'ir "

Zamil · May 25, 2006, 10:38pm

**GHAZAL **

**Lafz anokhe kya laaye ga tera shaa’ir ! **
**Kaha hua hi dohraaye ga tera shaa’ir ! **

**Apna kal jab saaf dikhaai deta ho to **
**Kaise khud ko behlaaye ga tera shaa’ir ! **

**Kurrhte kurrhte khoon ugalne lag jaaye ga **
**She’ron mein yoon rang laaye ga tera shaa’ir ! **

**Aadhi beeti, beetne ko hai baaqi aadhi **
Gum-naami mein gum jaaye ga tera shaa’ir !

Zamil

[RIGHT](written in June 2005)[/RIGHT]

darwesh · May 27, 2006, 2:14am

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Hai Zalim...Zamil...... Kiya Khoon Rolaya Hai,

Bari Rawan...Murassa...aur Kamyaab Ghazal Hai.... Mubarak Ho.

Yeh Humlog Kiss Weerane Main Aagaye... Ahl e Sukhan sab Kahan Hain ?

Bewafai · May 27, 2006, 6:50am

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Zamil · May 27, 2006, 10:51am

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**Is comey ka shukria… **

Zamil · May 27, 2006, 9:12pm

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Bohat shukria Darwesh jee…

Aap ne sahi kaha…ham log waaqaee kisi veeraane mein aa gaye hain…
**ham deewaane is veeraane mein aa gaye…or…ehl-e-sukhan sab shehr mein apne sukhan ki daad wusool karne gaye huey hain… **

Aaina_Dar · May 27, 2006, 10:52pm

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Apna kal jab saaf dikhaai deta ho to
**Kaise khud ko behlaaye ga tera shaa'ir ! **

*Kurrhte kurrhte khoon ugalne lag jaaye ga *
*She'ron mein yoon rang laaye ga tera shaa'ir ! *

Aadhi beeti, beetne ko hai baaqi aadhi **
**Gum-naami mein gum jaaye ga tera shaa'ir !

Wah jeeeeeeeee................Zamil itna Zalim kion hone laga hai:)......u know Zamil ap ki ye ghazal dekh ker mujay Derwesh Poet(Saghar Sadiqqi) yaad ah gaye hou bahu wahi indaz ap k lafzoon main aj nazar ahya hai.........well done again n again Zamil........U doin gr8 dear........................Aaina

Zamil · May 27, 2006, 11:20pm

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Barri nawaazish Aaina jee...
Shukr hai aap aaeen to sahi main to samjha tha waqt k bahaao mein door nikal gaeen shaayad...:)

Waise ek waqt tha jab Saghar jee mere hawaason pe chaaye huey they...us dauraan bohat c poetry un k kalaam k zeir-e-asar likhi...jis mein baada o saaghar or zamaane ki talkiyaan samoeen...that was 2000-to-2002...
Bas aapki zarra nawaazi hai k mere kalaam mein aap ko un ki jhalak nazar aaee...Bohat shukria is andaaz-e-pazeeraai ka...
*No doubt Saghar was a great poet n i m a great fan of him...:) *

rabia_rana · June 12, 2006, 9:00am

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wow..............ZAMIL u r realy ZALIm dost..................................................tussi mai no jhalli kitta si .................wadday hi zalim ho tussi.............................keep it up.......................RAB RAKHA

MazhaR_IqbaL · June 13, 2006, 4:57am

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nice

Prince_Ali · June 14, 2006, 4:03pm

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Good one :k:

Zamil · June 14, 2006, 8:15pm

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**mehrbaani… **
**par eh te dasso,…assi kadon tohaanoon jhalli kar dita…:halo:? **

Zamil · June 14, 2006, 8:17pm

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Thanx Prince & Mazhar jee… :k:

fara · June 15, 2006, 1:40pm

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Good one Zamil, Keep it coming....

Fara

Zamil · June 16, 2006, 6:29am

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Thanx alottttttt Fara jeeee…! :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 16, 2006, 10:24am

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Very nice Zamil :-)

Zamil · June 20, 2006, 9:37am

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Thanx Gul jee... :)

sunny_nicky · June 26, 2006, 10:01pm

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kiya baat hia pah geeeeeeeeeee nazar nahe arahay ho aaj kal waisay niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee haan

happy_dani · June 27, 2006, 8:31pm

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bohat khoob very nice pa g!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!zamilg tussi varey hi zalim ho.

Zamil · June 29, 2006, 1:25am

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*Shukria dosto... *:)

usman22 · July 8, 2006, 3:34am

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Zaamil sahab...Ustadon ko paar karna hai kya??? buhat ache