GHAZAL: Pus-e-diwaar-e-gham utthe the kabhi

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 6:54am

**Doosto, Salaam.o.Aadaab:

Aap ki mehfil meiN meree ye pehli post hai. Aik ghazal le kar haazir howa hooN. Aap ki aaraa ka intizaar rahe ga.

GHAZAL:

pur.e.diwaar.e.Gham utthe the kabhi iss tarah yaar hum utthe the kabhi

yaad rakhti hai un.ko tanhaaee
dil pe jo jo situm utthe the kabhi

daastaaN likh gae haiN chehre per
khwaab meiN jo alam utthe the kabhi

kuchh nahiN yaad juzz vo ik manzer
le ke palkaiN vo num utthe the kabhi

palkaiN chunti haiN un.ke naqsh :Khalish:
bhool meiN jo qadam utthe the kabhi

Agar urdu version paish karne ki ijaazat hai tu urdu version bhi post karne ki koshish kar raha hooN: **

http://www.ccse.kfupm.edu.sa/~nazim/Pase_diwar.gif

chand_chehra · December 8, 2002, 6:58am

very nice :K:

and

** welcome here**

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 7:07am

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*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
very nice :K:

and

** welcome here**
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*C_C * :) :) Buhot buhot shukria, ghazal pasand farmaane aur apnee mehfil meiN qabool karne ka :) :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · December 8, 2002, 10:48am

nice nice nice:k:
welkomeee

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 11:02am

M M Buhot buhot shukria doono navaazishooN ka

Khush RahaiN

Capricorn · December 8, 2002, 12:19pm

Very Nice N-Khalish :k:
I am a bit confused what it “N” wud become if we subtract “Khalish” from it?

arifnawaz1 · December 8, 2002, 12:33pm

**N-Khalish **

Welcome to Gupshup :k: :k: :k:

nikii · December 8, 2002, 1:39pm

very nice :k:

welcome

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 2:02pm

Buhot buhot shukria Capricorn I had no choice but to add N before my actual nick KHALISH, which is being used by some other member, who is not active these days and luckily does not come to Poetry Section, I would prefer to be called as KHALISH.

Thanks again

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 2:11pm

**Buhot buhot shukria arifnawaz Doono navaazishaat ka

Khush RahaiN **

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 2:14pm

**Buhot buhot shukria … karam.farmaaee hai aap ki

Khush RahaiN **

Jaan_Lewaa · December 8, 2002, 4:13pm

jabardus:k:
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n Wel Kum to GS

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 8, 2002, 9:37pm

beautiful:k::k:
thanks for sharing and WELCOME here:)

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 9:45pm

**Buhot buhot shukria Jaan Lewaa Buhot nawaazish hai aap ke **

N-Khalish · December 8, 2002, 9:54pm

**buhot buhot shukria ghazal kisi ki pazeeraaee per tahe.dil se mamnoon hooN **

Lamhay · December 9, 2002, 8:09am

bahut khoob khalish ji and welcome to gupshup poetry section!

N-Khalish · December 9, 2002, 4:30pm

**Buhot buhot shukria Lamhay doono nawaazishaat ka

Khush RahaiN **