GHAZAL : "...Khanjar Wahin Utaar Dia"

Zamil · July 14, 2006, 10:19am

GHAZAL

Sanam ne chashm ko jis rah ka intazaar dia
Ham aaise they k ye jeevan waheen guzaar dia

Gaee wo umr magar ttees na gaee dil se
Dia jo zakhm wafa ne so yaadgaar dia

Jigar k waaste paida sharaab kar daali
Khuda ne dil ko na koi bhi gham-gusaar dia

Jahaa(n) kisi ko lagaaya hai apne seene se
Usi ne taak k khanjar waheen utaar dia

Bhale hi chhorr dia raaste mein yaaron ne
Hamaari zaat ka aakhir ko aaitbaar dia

Dhula dhula sa ye chehra, ye surkh c aankhein
Tumhaare gham ne hamein aur bhi nikhaar dia

Mere badan pe ye aankhein kuch aaise lagti hain
Kisi ki qabr pe jaise ho sogawaar dia

Dilon se kheilna Zamil ! barri kharaabi thi
Kisi ne kheil k tum se tumhein sudhaar dia !
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[RIGHT]Nov’ 2004[/RIGHT]

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 14, 2006, 10:48am

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Buhat khoob Zamil, i like these shers ....thanks for sharing, hope to c more from your work:-)

PS: kaafi dinoN baad nazar aaein haiN?

Amal · July 14, 2006, 1:18pm

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Zamil bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey :k: Thanx a lot for sharing

darwesh · July 14, 2006, 10:27pm

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Jigar Zamil...Khushamdeed aur khushbash,

Saaf suthri aur Aabdaar Ghazal.... Kiya baat hai...Subhan Allah,
zindabaad.

Darwesh.

Zamil · July 19, 2006, 5:01am

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Bohat shukria Gul jee,
Bas exams ho rahe they or PC bhi kharab tha is liye itne din ghaaib raha...
*Thanx alottt for the concern...:) *

Zamil · July 19, 2006, 5:04am

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Barri nawazish Amal jee… :k:

Bholay_Bisray · July 19, 2006, 5:08am

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Very nice, aap loog tu bahut talented ho yaar... wo udher Amal ko daykho, when he writes tu really feel jaysay koi perfect artist picture buna raha ho. urs also very nice, but i guess with time you will improve alot, as i feel, its God given ability in you.
Thanks for shairing! :)

PS:- PC koi kiya kur diya? :) pata nahi why Pakistan main loogoon kay PC kharab rahtay hain.....

Zamil · July 19, 2006, 5:09am

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...or saaf suthre or aabdaar comments bhi...:) **
**Barri nawazish...

Zamil · July 19, 2006, 5:15am

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Thanx dost.
PC ko 2 saal tak to haath nahi lagana parra ek dam theek chala phir thak gaya shayad...:)

mahamkhan · July 19, 2006, 10:16am

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very very nice....!

Zamil · July 19, 2006, 9:25pm

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Thanx Maham... :)

1Nabiha · July 20, 2006, 12:44am

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bohat khoob

Jaan_Lewaa · July 20, 2006, 4:49am

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zabardast

Sannan · July 21, 2006, 10:56am

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**Wah Bhai wah …Zamil cheeta laga hay yaar…

yaar in my sutdent life aik truck kay peechay khanjar kay baray main she’r parha tha …

Nigahoo Say Qatal Kar do Kah Donoon Ko Takeelf Nah Hoo
Tumhain Khanjar Uthany Key …

Yeh Misra Parhnay kay baad ek aur vehicle came but i did’nt over take and read the remainng as this was great suspense what will be next so next was
Mujhay Gardan Jhukanay Key

**

Zamil · July 25, 2006, 9:15pm

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Bohat bohat shukria, Nabiha, Jaan Lewaa n Sannan !!! :) :) :)

Khaloo_Khalil · July 27, 2006, 5:07am

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Allah ka lakh lakh shukr hai keh kisi ne tumhein sudhar dia. Is 11th Khilari ko mera Salaam.

charming_gurl · July 29, 2006, 2:09pm

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bohut lajawab

Zamil · August 2, 2006, 11:54am

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Thanx C G !

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 2, 2006, 12:23pm

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Beautiful thanks for sharing nd keep writing.

Saqi_the_angel · August 2, 2006, 2:58pm

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bhaut khoob