Ghazal: Ham se Hota wo...

Aadaab Dear Qare-een!

Aap ki khidmat meN aik Ghazal paish kar raha hooN , apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyay ga.

Wassalam
Mukhlic
Ameen Asim

Re: Ghazal: Ham se Hota wo…

Khush Aamadeed Janab Ameen Saahab…!


Bohat zabardast ghazal laaye hian aap. Kamaal ka likha hai.
Ash’aar number 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 aur 9 bohat behtareen hain…mazaameen or wazan dono k lehaaz se khaalis hain.


Alaah aur taraqqi ata farmaaye. Ghazal share karne ka bohat shukria…
**Khush rahiye… **:k:

Re: Ghazal: Ham se Hota wo...

Jigar Ameen Asim....Khushbash,

Muras'sa Ghazal Mubarak.... Allah Kare Zore Qalam Aur Ziyada.

darwesh

Re: Ghazal: Ham se Hota wo...

bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai thx ameen 4 sharing