GHAZAL: Gaye Mausamon Ki Khabar Nahi...

GHAZAL


**Gaye mausamon ki khabar nahi, naye mausamon ka pataa nahi
Wo mere sheher se chalaa gaya kisi gul ne mujh se kahaa nahi
**
**Yehi soch kar meri aankh se kabhi koi ashk bahaa nahi
Rahe aankh mein hai wohi ghattaa, jo baras gaee wo ghattaa nahi
**
Is dil mein aas ka ik dia, wo gaya to ham ne jalaa lia
Wo dia jo dil mein udaasiyon bhari aandhiyon se bujhaa nahi

**
Main charaagh sa hoon bujhaa bujhaa, shab-e-hijr teerah-o-taar hai
Main ne khud chuni hai ye teergi mujhe us se koi gilaa nahi

Mutawaqqo hijr k sog mein hi guzar na jaoon main jaan se
Mujhe koi de ye khabar k haan wo gayaa nahi, wo gayaa nahi

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(poet: me ofcourse :slight_smile:
Zamil
[RIGHT]**(written in Oct’ 1999)****[/RIGHT]

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Each sher is beautifully balanced and had kept their beauty! Hope to see more from you. Thank you for sharing :k:

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B E A U T I F U L ......

aik aur poet ka izafa.. :) keep it up.... nd keep sharin' :)

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Zamil bohat hi khoobsoorat tehreer hey :k: … Thanx a lot for sharing this beauty with us. And as others said, looking forward to read more from you :slight_smile:

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Beautiful… :flower1:

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**Yehi soch kar meri aankh se kabhi koi ashk bahaa nahi

Rahe aankh mein hai wohi ghattaa, jo baras gaee wo ghattaa nahi**

Zaberdast Zamil.......Bohat khoob...kya Ada hai kya Tevar hein again Zaberdast!!!!!!!...Khobsorat ilfaz her koi likh leeta hai par onn khobsorat ilfaz ka istamaal kisi kisi ko kerna ahta hai aur ye khoobi app ki poetry k inder nazar ayi......Umeed hai issi tara k khobsorat ilfaz hamein app ki tarf se parnay ko miltay raheen gaay:)..............Aaina

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Zamil, apki ghazal mashallah buhat ummda hai. I'm amazed at how well you write ... and thori jealous bhi :D
I hope you keep posting ... I'll certainly keep reading.

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Thanx alotttttt my friends, my admirers!!!
Baqaul Faiz;
.........Mere hamdam mere dost !
Roz o shab, shaam o sahar main tujhe behlaata rahoon
Main tujhe geet sunaata rahoon halke, sheeree(n)
Aabshaaron k, bahaaron k chaman-zaaron k geet
.........
Thanx again. (kaheen mera weight na barrh jaaye... ;-)

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Realy beautiful.Zamil,keep posting.
weight barrna chaheay poetry main .kafi wazan main ho.good luck.