Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

Zamil · May 5, 2006, 12:17am

GHAZAL

Furqat mein tere pyaar ka ghar jalne laga hai
" Aa ja k mere dil ka nagar jalne laga hai "

Is mai se bhale dil ki agan bujhne lagi ho
Par ye bhi haqeeqat hai jigar jalne laga hai

Mausam ko nahi, ishq ne badla hai mujhi ko
Tthandda hai na sooraj na qamar jalne laga hai

Hai rashk mein ab ghair inaayat pe tumhari
Jo daagh idhar tha wo udhar jalne laga hai

Pathraaya koi muntazir-e-deed hi shaayad
Kuttia mein dia shaam o sahar jalne laga hai

Sho’la hai jo andar wo qalam tak nahi aata
Kis aag mein ye mera hunar jalne laga hai

Zamil
[RIGHT] (written: 05-05-2006 – 05:30 am)[/RIGHT]

Aaina_Dar · May 5, 2006, 12:33am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar…For Her Ghazal “Dard”

…Zamil ab main boloon k na boloon???

Zamil · May 5, 2006, 12:50am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar…For Her Ghazal “Dard”

**…Bolo Bolo… **

Jia_online · May 5, 2006, 1:09am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

Zabardast. Boht khoobsorat.

Zamil · May 5, 2006, 1:15am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

*Nawaazish. Bohat shukria.:) *

sara_farooqui · May 5, 2006, 3:39am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

Sho'la hai jo andar wo qalam tak nahi aata
Kis aag mein ye mera hunar jalne laga hai
*
**Buhat khooob,,, buhat acha,,,*

Shahana · May 5, 2006, 5:35am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

chagayho...kia sman bandha hai....termendous....bari tapash si aa rahi hai.It realy beautiful. nice n well put.:):):):):):).

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Mausam ko nahi, ishq ne badla hai mujhi ko
Tthandda hai na sooraj na qamar jalne laga hai
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very poetic

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Sho'la hai jo andar wo qalam tak nahi aata
Kis aag mein ye mera hunar jalne laga hai
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SubhanAllah Allah karay zorre qalam or ziyada....................shan*[RIGHT]:)
(written: 05-05-2006 -- 05:30 am)*[/RIGHT]

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sunny_nicky · May 5, 2006, 11:23pm

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

kiya kehne hai gee waha wahh ok bye

Zamil · May 6, 2006, 6:34am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

Sara Farooqui n sunny_nicky...!

Bohat bohattt shukria....
Khush rahiye.... :-)

Zamil · May 6, 2006, 7:13am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar...For Her Ghazal "Dard"

Barri nawazish...
Bohat shukria...
:)

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 6, 2006, 6:48pm

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar…For Her Ghazal “Dard”

zamil uncle :k: merea lie kub like rehea ho

Zamil · May 7, 2006, 1:30am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar…For Her Ghazal “Dard”

Bhateeji…
**Aap k liye likhne hi parre ga… **
**Mujhe GUNS:2guns: se waise hi ddar lagta hai… 7-MM…!!! **

rabia_rana · May 23, 2006, 8:16pm

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simply the best.....zalim...........keep it up..........

Zamil · May 24, 2006, 1:01am

Re: Ghazal, Dedicated To Aaina Dar…For Her Ghazal “Dard”

**Thanx Alotttt… **
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