Ghazal: Ahmad Nadeem Qasmi

Jhanjharewali · September 9, 2008, 1:09pm

faaslay ke ma’ene ka kyun fareb khatay ho
jitni dour jaate ho utna paas aatey ho

raat toot parti hei jab sakoot-e-zindan mei
tum mere khayalon mei chhup ke gungunate ho

mere khilwat-e-gham ke aahini dareechon per
apni muskurahat ke mash’alein jalate ho

jab tani salakhon se jhanktee hei tanhai
dil ki tarha pehluu se lag ke baeth jaate ho

tum mere iradon ke doltay sitaron ko
yaas ki khalaon mei raasta dikhate ho

kitna yaad kerte ho? poochte ho kyun mujh se
jitna yaad kartay ho utna yaad aatey ho
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AHMAD NADEEM QASMI

muncho · September 9, 2008, 4:04pm

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tum mere iradon ke doltay sitaron ko
yaas ki khalaon mei raasta dikhate ho

kitna yaad kerte ho? poochte ho kyun mujh se
jitna yaad kartay ho utna yaad aatey ho

bahut aala g!

being_lonely · September 9, 2008, 4:27pm

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Thats for me Jw ;) thankew thankew :)

Shumaisa · September 10, 2008, 12:48am

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Bohat khoob..

muddii · September 10, 2008, 2:45am

Nihayat Shandaar Intikhaab JJW:)

aabla_pa · September 10, 2008, 3:41am

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Splendid. :k:

S.786 · September 10, 2008, 7:13am

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very nice jh

rida_ali · September 10, 2008, 11:21am

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kitna yaad kerte ho? poochte ho kyun mujh se
jitna yaad kartay ho utna yaad aatey ho

rida_ali · September 10, 2008, 11:24am

superb

Shab-e-Hijar · September 10, 2008, 5:35pm

jitna door jatay ho utna pass atay ho … wah bohat khoob :k:

NikamiJano · September 16, 2008, 3:40pm

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very nice sharing JWali :)

Jhanjharewali · September 17, 2008, 7:02pm

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thanks every1

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 17, 2008, 8:32pm

Tani, how to pronouns? i did't get :-)

Jhanjharewali · September 17, 2008, 8:42pm

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my understanding is...tan...as in body.
maybe my presentation is wrong (musmus ki sohbat ka asar :p)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 17, 2008, 8:47pm

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hmm Dictionary laati hooN

Jhanjharewali · September 17, 2008, 8:49pm

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acha. thanks. check ker ke sahi ker dena. i was thinking abt it too when i made the thread.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 17, 2008, 8:53pm

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Tani theek hey, tani doRi ko kahtey heiN, lekin shaaid yahaaN band hissey sey jab tanhaai jhankna,

wesey talwaar gardan pe tani hey, ye bhi hota hey shaaid

let me ask to AQ

AQ · September 17, 2008, 9:01pm

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^ correct

Ta'ni is pronounced at

TaY, NooN, choti Yeh

jaisay darakht kaa tanaa pronounce kartaY haiN....

tanaa say tani...

yaa jaisaY fauji ta'n kar khaRay hotaY haiN...

Hope that helped :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 17, 2008, 9:04pm

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jab tani salakhon se jhanktee hei tanhai

yahaaN kya matlab baney ga

AQ · September 17, 2008, 9:34pm

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jab [apnay hee kamraY kee khiRki] maiN tani saalaakhoN say jhaaNkti hai tanhaai...

makes sense?