GHAZAL after long long time :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · September 8, 2005, 8:13am

GHAZAL

**Ye Kia ke Dil ko Sare Aam Bechnay Aye
YahaaN bikay ga Tera Pyar kooRiooN ke daam

Issi Dagar pe chalo gay tou hosh kho do gay
Magar milay ga na saqi ke haath ka ikk jaam

Tera junoon hay, wo tujh ko bhi pukaray kabhi
Na rakh umeed kabhi wo bhi lega tera naam.

Wo jiss ka pyar sare daar tum ko Le Aya
Kahay hay Ishq ka maada hay tera ab bhi khaam

JakaR chuki hay tujhay iltifaat ki wo yaas
Wagarna wus’ate dunya hay Ishq ka ikk gaam.
(Golden Scorpion)**

nakhan · September 8, 2005, 11:46am

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Wah Wah... very nice

Mukarar
Mukarar

Jhuki_Nigahein · September 8, 2005, 4:12pm

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JakaR chuki hay tujhay iltifaat ki wo yaas
Wagarna wus'ate dunya hay Ishq ka ikk gaam

wah buhat khoobsorat, keep sharing with us :)

fghd · September 8, 2005, 4:35pm

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wah golden scorpio i didnt know u write ghazals too....masha'allah very nice.

ASA · September 8, 2005, 5:28pm

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mashAllah mashAllah… akhir ma na impressd showe kana..

p.s very nice… :k:

parissenoor · September 8, 2005, 10:39pm

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finally i got to read your poetry too!!!!!!!!! bad qismati se main samajh nahin sakti

Azad · September 9, 2005, 10:20pm

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hummm

Golden_Scorpion_1 · September 11, 2005, 6:32am

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Thanks nakhan , For Mukarar read it again

Jhuki Nigahein, Shukria Jesay Jesay Nazil hotay jayengay hum pesh kartay Jeyengay, but Nazil honay ki Speed Buhut kam hay

Tasha… Life is full of New things , Now U know… and Thanks

ASA… Tum cheez hi aisi ho

**Azad **Bhai…
Nice to see You

Golden_Scorpion_1 · September 11, 2005, 6:42am

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Samajh NaheeN Sakti tou … I will try to Translate it… Although I might not be able to translate it completely but.. still will try…

Here U go..

Ye Kia ke Dil ko Sare Aam Bechnay Aye
YahaaN bikay ga Tera Pyar kooRiooN ke daam

Why you came to sell your heart and offered it to everyone, no one will give away good proce for it here and it will be sold in pennies.

Issi Dagar pe chalo gay tou hosh kho do gay
Magar milay ga na saqi ke haath ka ikk jaam

If you move on further on the same path, atlast you will be out of your sences BUT still you wont even get one sip of Drink from your beloved’s hands.

Tera junoon hay, wo tujh ko bhi pukaray kabhi
Na rakh umeed kabhi wo bhi lega tera naam.

You are dieng for it that any day your beloved will call you, but your hopes will never come true, and your name wont be called.

Wo jiss ka pyar sare daar tum ko Le Aya
Kahay hay Ishq ka maada hay tera ab bhi khaam

The one for whom you are standing in front of Executioner to get killed is saying that the spirt of your love is still not good enough.

JakaR chuki hay tujhay iltifaat ki wo yaas
Wagarna wus’ate dunya hay Ishq ka ikk gaam.

You have been chained by the hopes of being together and love, thats why you cannot move, otherwise the total vastness of this world is only a single step for love.

parissenoor · September 11, 2005, 12:40pm

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Golden Scorpion, for translation, deera manana:hug:
staso ye->:halo:
this poem meaning is.. quite sad:(

Koyal · September 11, 2005, 12:48pm

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Tera junoon hay, wo tujh ko bhi pukaray kabhi
Na rakh umeed kabhi wo bhi lega tera naam.

Golden baji acha likh liati hain ap
:k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 · September 12, 2005, 3:59am

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NOOR… well Happiness n Sorrows are two very important companions of life… So… Both should be treated well

Koyal MamooN … Aji aap ki Zara Nawazi hay Warna hum Kiss Qabil..

parissenoor · September 15, 2005, 5:52pm

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your poem is sooooooooooo true eveerything you wrote is true…nothing is lie, nothing is wrong…I only fail to see happiness in it:( except for the hope at the end:confused:

reet · September 18, 2005, 9:22am

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bahot khob.........GS

Golden_Scorpion_1 · September 18, 2005, 11:31am

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NOOR

Reet… Tnx

Amal · September 18, 2005, 3:38pm

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GS achi thereer hey:k:…Thanx for sharing with us…and do write often please

parissenoor · September 18, 2005, 6:52pm

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please goldie don’t cry for me, my tears are enough and you got a pretty smile so don’t cry:D

system · September 19, 2005, 10:41am

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bohat aala :)

Barbie_Girl · September 19, 2005, 10:43am

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Goldie

You And Your Ghazal Is Simply Great

Golden_Scorpion_1 · September 19, 2005, 5:51pm

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Amal… Pasnadeedgi Ka Shukria…
Har koi tou aap jesa naheeN hota na Sir… App Jab chahay Likh Saktay haiN hum tou bas… Kabhi Kabhi Zabardast LIkhwatay HiaN khud Se

Noor… Are U sure I have a good Smile

Ahsan … Shukria Hazoor

Barbie… Missing You yar…