Koyal
1
***lo ham bujha rahey hain charaghoN ko sham se
ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
kaa’tein geiN gham ki raat baRay etminaa’n se
dukh apna sonp keR andheron ko shaam se
ho apnaa IkhtiyaaR to ghaR ghaR dee’ey jaleiN
chalne na dein sitam ki Hawa’ooN ko sham se***
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
***lo ham bujha rahey hain charaghoN ko sham se
ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
kaa'tein geiN gham ki raat baRay etminaa'n se
dukh apna sonp keR andheron ko shaam se
ho apnaa IkhtiyaaR to ghaR ghaR dee'ey jaleiN
chalne na dein sitam ki Hawa'ooN ko sham se***
kia baat hai Koyal ji.. :-)
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
buhut khoob :)
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
***lo ham bujha rahey hain charaghoN ko sham se
ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
kaa'tein geiN gham ki raat baRay etminaa'n se
dukh apna sonp keR andheron ko shaam se
ho apnaa IkhtiyaaR to ghaR ghaR dee'ey jaleiN
chalne na dein sitam ki Hawa'ooN ko sham se***
Very nice as usual:)
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
ek baat tow man ni paregi larkiyu ki collection achhi hoti hai poetry ki... again bohat khoob
Amal
6
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
very nice 
babri
7
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
Nice.
pktun
8
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
nyc sharing Koyal :k:
Azad
9
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hummm
Aryaan
10
Re: ghaR se rakhein ge door Ujaalon ko shaam se
Bohat Khoob Koyal..