ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa'ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

Koyal · December 15, 2009, 3:58am

aj meray aey’zaz maiN is ne kia acha saa’maaN kia
ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa’ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

mehfil maiN dush’waar tha in se bolna b chup rahna b
aa’nkhooN maiN pehchaaN rakhi aur lahjay ko anjaN kia

aey’hal-janu se baat chali tu qisa dil ka bhayed kholay
moasam-e-jaa’na chor faseel-e-daar ko phiR unwaaN kia

mehfil maiN haR aik se haans kaR baataiN kaRnay walay ne
ik nazaR hum peR bhi daa’li itna tu ahsaaN kia

kitni ghari’aaN giN giN kaa’teiN kitnay moasam beet gaa’ey
dil ka daRd na thehRa pal bhaR laakh kisi ka dehaaN kee’ya

being_lonely · December 15, 2009, 12:34pm

Re: ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa’ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

Kya khoobsurti se alfaaz ko ghazal ki shakal mein piroya hai kya kehne umda :k:

saqijani · December 15, 2009, 4:19pm

Re: ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa'ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

bohot khoobsoorat kalaam hai

udaas · December 16, 2009, 5:17pm

Re: ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa'ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

very nice sharing

porcelain_doll · December 16, 2009, 6:37pm

Re: ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa’ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

very nice:thumb:

jonaid · December 16, 2009, 9:27pm

Re: ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa'ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

jawab nahi apki soch ka or alfazon ki choice ka very nice

Aryaan · December 17, 2009, 12:43am

Re: ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa’ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

Very Nice** Koyal**..:k:

Shab-e-Hijar · December 17, 2009, 7:58pm

Nice1 koyal jano :)

Muhammad_Adeel · December 17, 2009, 8:26pm

**bohot khoob KOYAL :k: **

silent_eye · December 18, 2009, 5:28am

Re: ghaR maiN baRaf k phool sajaa'ey suraj ko mehmaN kia

nice one