ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo'N ko tham hi leitey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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http://www.aansooforum.com/image/U12738-1214331664.jpg

bari lambi kahani hai tuhmhey leikin sunani hai
tera ghum jaan leva par teri yadeein suhani hain

ghamoon ko chor hum deitey,sakoon ko tham hi leitey
ghamoon sey kya karein leikin, bari yari purani hai

zameen ko cheerNa chaheiN hawa ko thamna chahaiN
bari pagal sahi laikin yahi yaro jawani hai

ae gham tu door hi rehna, samandar ansoon ka hai
baha le jaye na tujh ko, ye lehri bhi dewani hain

mohabat bhol b jatey sanam pey youN na hum martey
magar ‘! bay-bas haiN ye afat asmani hai.

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nice ghazal and lovely image … asay lugrha me and john bethay ho :cb:

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Re: ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo'N ko tham hi leitey

v.v nice choice

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Re: ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo’N ko tham hi leitey

shabo diN maiN sapnay dekhnay chor daiN :hoonh:

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zalim samaj sapnay bhi nahi dekhnay deta :hinna:

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Re: ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo'N ko tham hi leitey

I like 4th sheir :-)

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bohat khoob Koyal jee.

Party badal lee :slight_smile:

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nice koyal

john kon hai shaboo :aq:

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LOL aho :D

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ab kya kaho shram ati hai :blush:

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oh tu ap ko BHI ati hia didn’t know :smiley:

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Re: ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo'N ko tham hi leitey

Good One Koyal...

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Re: ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo'N ko tham hi leitey

*bouhat achay.. *

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Re: ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo'N ko tham hi leitey

Buhat Khoob :~)

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thanks pee^k :)

Paindoo list...
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Re: ghamoon ko chor hum deitey sakoo'N ko tham hi leitey

Bohat khoob..

..So I never wanted to open this thread!
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thanks emaan :)

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thanks gul :)

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U r Welcome ..... ;-)

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thanks sweet :)