Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ehsan May 4, 2011, 8:30pm 1

Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine
**usi ko dekhiye dariya bana liya maine

** ** bas eik raaz Chupaaya tha aur uske baad**
**us aaine se ye chehra Chupa liya maine

** ajiib hoti hai ye dillagi bhi aiy yaaro
** jo haal uska tha apna banaa liya maine

** qariib aaeingi khushiyaan magar ghamon ke sath
**nasiib mein ye ajab kya likha liya maine

** kisii ki aankh ke do aansu hi to pouchhe thay
paraayi aag se daaman jalaa liya maine

UZ May 4, 2011, 9:47pm 2

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

Very nice Ehsan bhai :k:
especially sher no.2

muddii May 5, 2011, 3:23am 3

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

Very Nice:)

Amarbail May 5, 2011, 11:57am 4

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

Bahut umdaah Ehsan bhai … :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh May 5, 2011, 7:03pm 5

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

bohat khoob.. share karnay ka shukriya.. :-)

waleedhbk May 5, 2011, 11:04pm 6

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

Awesome :k:

Amal May 6, 2011, 3:29am 7

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

Achi ghazal hey ehsan bhai :k:

Koyal May 10, 2011, 2:43am 8

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

V nice 1 :)

Innocent_Smile May 10, 2011, 7:34am 9

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

boht khobsorat ghazal hai. Thanks for sharing it with us Ehsan bhai :)

Aryaan May 10, 2011, 9:54pm 10

Re: Ghamon ki aanch se qatra bacha liye maine

Very Nice Ehsan Bhai..:k: